Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (ví dụ: I prefer typing) rồi bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh từ thừa và sửa lỗi so sánh trạng từ/ tính từ (quickly → quick/fast).

Example: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and faster than handwriting. For example, I can edit documents quickly and share them online with classmates.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời đã rõ ràng nhưng có một vài lỗi nhỏ (double 'on', nói quá dài). Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, sửa lỗi lặp và thêm từ nối để mạch lạc. Nên dùng từ chính xác (use a laptop daily) và cụ thể hoá thời lượng hoặc mục đích.

Example: I use a laptop every day for studying and chatting with friends. Usually I spend two to three hours on it doing coursework, browsing the internet and messaging people.

Suggestion: Cần câu trả lời mạch lạc và ngữ pháp đúng. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu thời điểm (When I was 11). Giải thích ngắn gọn về hoàn cảnh và cảm nhận, tránh câu rời rạc và thiếu chính tả. Sử dụng thì quá khứ hoàn chỉnh cho sự kiện trong quá khứ.

Example: I learned to type when I was 11 in a school technology class. At first it was very difficult because I couldn't remember the key positions, but with practice I improved.

Suggestion: Cần diễn đạt rõ phương pháp và kết quả bằng câu mạch lạc. Sử dụng cấu trúc: topic sentence + 1–2 supporting details với từ nối (for example, as a result). Chú ý ngữ pháp (daily → daily practice; spacing/accuracy) và ngữ vựng chính xác.

Example: I practice typing every day for about 50 minutes, mostly by using social apps and doing timed exercises to improve speed and accuracy. As a result, my fingers are faster and I make fewer mistakes.

× Umm, I think could me.

✓ Umm, I think I could.

The student omitted the subject 'I' before the modal verb 'could' and placed words in the wrong order. In English, modal verbs (could) require a subject directly before them. Suggestion: always include the subject and follow the pattern 'I could + verb' or 'I think I could.'

× I would like typing because it's very convenient and it's quickly.

✓ I would like typing because it's very convenient and it's quick.

The student used the adverb 'quickly' to modify 'it', but 'quick' (adjective) is needed to describe the noun 'it' (the method). Use 'quick' or rephrase 'it is quick and convenient.' Suggestion: use adjectives to describe nouns and adverbs to describe verbs.

× I don't have a desktop.

✓ I don't have a desktop computer.

'Desktop' alone is acceptable in speech, but adding 'computer' clarifies the meaning. This is a minor clarity issue rather than strict grammar; keep 'desk­top computer' for formality and clarity.

× I usually spend a few hours on on it doing coursework, browsing the Internet and messaging people.

✓ I usually spend a few hours on it doing coursework, browsing the Internet, and messaging people.

The sentence has a repeated preposition 'on on' and missing commas. Remove the duplicate 'on' and add a comma before 'and' in a list. Suggestion: proofread to remove duplicated words and punctuate lists.

× I think it's when I was 11 years old.

✓ I think it was when I was 11 years old.

Mixing 'I think' (present) with 'it's' (it is) is awkward; 'it was' correctly places the reference in past time. Use past tense 'was' when referring to a past time.

× I have a technology class and the last This is the first time I typing and it very difficult.

✓ I had a technology class, and that was the first time I typed; it was very difficult.

Multiple issues: tense consistency (use past 'had' and 'typed'), word order ('that was the first time'), missing auxiliary 'was' before 'very difficult', and incorrect form 'typing' instead of past 'typed'. Suggestion: keep past events in past tense and use correct verb forms.

× I cannot remember position of.

✓ I cannot remember the positions of the keys.

The original lacks the object of 'position of' and the correct article. Provide the full noun phrase: 'the positions of the keys' to clarify meaning. Suggestion: always include the object and correct articles.

× I pretty daily you saw for about 50 minutes using typing to social software and also good time exercise to improve space and accuracy.

✓ I type almost every day for about 50 minutes using social apps, and I also do exercises to improve speed and accuracy.

Many issues: 'pretty daily' is incorrect (use 'almost every day'), 'you saw' is irrelevant and wrong, 'using typing to social software' should be 'using social apps' or 'typing on social apps', 'good time exercise' should be 'do exercises', 'space' should be 'speed'. Suggestion: simplify and use common collocations: 'type almost every day', 'use social apps', 'do exercises', 'speed and accuracy.'

× As a result my fingers have become faster and I make few mistakes.

✓ As a result, my fingers have become faster and I make fewer mistakes.

Use the comparative 'fewer' with countable 'mistakes' not 'few'. Also add a comma after 'As a result'. The present perfect 'have become' is fine to show change; keep 'I make fewer mistakes.' Suggestion: use 'fewer' for countable nouns and 'less' for uncountable.