Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer handwriting because as a student, handwriting can help me pass the exam. Uh, when I using handwriting to take down notes or do some reviews, I will remember every letters I wrote down.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Yes, I do type on uh laptop keyboard recently because I am in my internship and the school or the company asked me to bring my laptop to deal with some works or to create.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a primary school students. We have computer lessons at that time and there is a there was a gain on the computer which told the students to remember the position of each letter.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I keep practicing to improve my typing. When I am typing, I try to focus my eyes on the screen and not to look at the keyboards so I can force myself to remember the positions of every letter.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答要更自然、语法更准确,并且用连接词使表达连贯。避免填充词(如“uh”),注意动词时态和单复数。可先给出主题句,再用两到三个具体原因支持,例如记忆效果、理解更深、速度或习惯。
Example: I prefer handwriting. Firstly, writing notes by hand helps me remember information better because the physical act reinforces memory. Secondly, handwriting forces me to slow down and process ideas more deeply, which improves my understanding when I review.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答需更直接和简洁,避免语气词,改进语法(时态与冠词)。用一两句简短支持细节,说明具体工作或任务类型,并用连接词使句子通顺。
Example: Yes, I usually type on a laptop. I am currently doing an internship, so I need my laptop every day to write reports and create presentations for my supervisor.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 注意句子结构和时态一致(单复数、一致性的过去式)。避免重复和不清晰表达,改用更具体的词汇描述课程内容。可以先给时间点,然后说明学习方式或练习方法。
Example: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had weekly computer lessons where we used a typing program that taught us the position of the keys and gave exercises to practice accuracy and speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答已经包含要点,但可用更自然的表达和连词,并补充具体练习方法(例如练习时间、在线练习或速度目标)。注意不定式和动名词的使用,保证句子简洁。
Example: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. I set aside 20 minutes a day for online typing exercises and try to keep my eyes on the screen rather than the keyboard so I can learn the key positions and increase my speed.
× Uh, when I using handwriting to take down notes or do some reviews, I will remember every letters I wrote down.
✓ Uh, when I use handwriting to take down notes or do some reviews, I will remember every letter I write down.
原句中“when I using”结构不正确。动词在“when”引导的时间从句中应使用一般现在时或动词原形(在第一人称单数不加 -ing),因此应改为“when I use”。另外“every letters”涉及单数复数错误(见下面一项),应改为“every letter”。“wrote”与主要句时态不一致,应使用一般现在时“write”,因为主句是将来/习惯性“will remember”。 建议多练习时间状语从句的时态搭配,注意主句与从句的时态一致性。
× Uh, when I using handwriting to take down notes or do some reviews, I will remember every letters I wrote down.
✓ Uh, when I use handwriting to take down notes or do some reviews, I will remember every letter I write down.
原句中“every letters”使用错误。every 后只能接单数名词,应为“every letter”。 建议记住“every + 单数名词”结构,表示“每一个……”。
× Yes, I do type on uh laptop keyboard recently because I am in my internship and the school or the company asked me to bring my laptop to deal with some works or to create.
✓ Yes, I have been typing on a laptop keyboard recently because I am in my internship and the school or company asked me to bring my laptop to deal with some work or to create.
原句中“do type”与副词“recently”搭配不自然,应使用现在完成进行时或现在完成时表近期持续动作,改为“have been typing”。此外“works”用法不当,英语中表示任务或工作通常用不可数名词“work”。“a laptop keyboard”前缺冠词,改为“a laptop keyboard”。 建议学习现在完成时与现在完成进行时的用法,以及不可数名词“work”的用法。
× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a primary school students.
✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a primary school student.
原句中“was a primary school students”中主语与表语数不一致。应为单数“student”,因为主语是单数“I”。 建议注意主语与表语的人称和数一致。
× Yes, I do type on uh laptop keyboard recently because I am in my internship and the school or the company asked me to bring my laptop to deal with some works or to create.
✓ Yes, I have been typing on a laptop keyboard recently because I am in my internship and the school or company asked me to bring my laptop to deal with some work or to create.
原句中“type on uh laptop keyboard”中的介词“on”可以接受,但前面缺不定冠词“a”;另外“in my internship”习惯搭配可用“during my internship”更地道,但“in my internship”可理解。建议学习常用介词搭配,如“type on a keyboard”“during my internship”“deal with work”。
× We have computer lessons at that time and there is a there was a gain on the computer which told the students to remember the position of each letter.
✓ We had computer lessons at that time and there was a game on the computer which told the students to remember the position of each letter.
原句时态混乱且单词错误。“have computer lessons at that time”应使用过去时“had”,因为叙述过去发生的事情。原句中“there is a there was a gain”含重复与拼写错误,应该是“there was a game”。“which told the students to remember”用过去时与前文一致。建议注意过去叙述时使用过去时,并检查单词拼写。
× Yes, I do type on uh laptop keyboard recently because I am in my internship and the school or the company asked me to bring my laptop to deal with some works or to create.
✓ Yes, I have been typing on a laptop keyboard recently because I am in my internship and the school or company asked me to bring my laptop to deal with some work or to create.
原句中副词“recently”放在“do type”之后造成语序不自然。使用现在完成时“have been typing”并把“recently”放在动词短语之后更自然。建议学习副词在句中常见位置(如完成时后、动词前等),以提高自然表达。
× When I am typing, I try to focus my eyes on the screen and not to look at the keyboards so I can force myself to remember the positions of every letter.
✓ When I am typing, I try to focus my eyes on the screen and not to look at the keyboard so I can force myself to remember the position of every letter.
原句中“not to look at the keyboards”中“keyboards”不需要复数,且与“the keyboard”搭配更自然;“positions of every letter”可以改为“position of every letter”更简洁。建议注意单数复数的一致性和表达简洁性。