Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer typing because right now we going to be a technology world, so we always use our phone and our laptop to type in many texts to create many research or many time many kind of the text.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
I type on my keyboard of the my laptop because I usually writing my research on my laptop and create many many document on the laptop. So I always type on the keyboard of the laptop.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
When I watch shines my home have a a big computer when I was child, so I'm learn to typing it on that keyboard and I am maybe just six years old and I really love it. So happy with that.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I think the way to improve the typing is spend time with that. I think a many skill we need to spend some time with that and we need to try to learn about the muscle memory of our hand and how to bring learning of that typical typing of our hand control.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise: give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific reasons with examples, and correct grammar. Use linking words (because, so) correctly and avoid repetition.
Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because we live in a digital world and I often need to write emails and research papers on my laptop. For example, I usually draft essays and save notes on my phone, which is faster and easier to edit than handwriting.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms, avoid repetition, and add a brief specific detail about frequency or purpose. Use a linking word to connect reason.
Example: I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I write research papers and prepare documents there. For instance, I usually spend two to three hours daily writing and editing assignments on my laptop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer stating the age or time, then one concise supporting detail or feeling. Use past tense for past events and avoid unclear phrases.
Example: I learned to type when I was about six years old after my family got a large home computer. I enjoyed practicing on that keyboard and quickly became comfortable typing simple stories and schoolwork.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 52.0Suggestion: Provide a clear method with specific steps, use correct grammar, and include linking words to connect ideas. Mention practical activities (practice, online lessons, typing tests) and measurable goals.
Example: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and using online typing exercises to build muscle memory. For example, I practice for 20 minutes a day with typing tests and focus on accuracy before speed, which has noticeably improved my typing over a few weeks.
× I prefer typing because right now we going to be a technology world, so we always use our phone and our laptop to type in many texts to create many research or many time many kind of the text.
✓ I prefer typing because right now we live in a technological world, so we always use our phones and laptops to type many texts and create research or different kinds of documents.
Errors: incorrect present tense form 'going to be' (should use simple present 'live' for general fact), incorrect noun forms and plurals ('phone'/'laptop' should be plural), awkward phrases ('many research' and 'many time many kind of the text'). Suggestion: Use simple present for general truths, make nouns plural when referring to more than one, use 'research' or 'research papers' and 'different kinds of documents' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 6
× I type on my keyboard of the my laptop because I usually writing my research on my laptop and create many many document on the laptop. So I always type on the keyboard of the laptop.
✓ I type on my laptop's keyboard because I usually write my research on my laptop and create many documents on it. So I always use the laptop's keyboard.
Errors: incorrect continuous form 'writing' where simple present 'write' is needed for habitual action; incorrect article usage 'the my'; singular/plural mismatch 'document' should be 'documents'; awkward repetition. Suggestions: Use possessive form 'laptop's keyboard', use simple present for habitual actions, make nouns plural when appropriate, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Grammar problem type ID: 6
× When I watch shines my home have a a big computer when I was child, so I'm learn to typing it on that keyboard and I am maybe just six years old and I really love it.
✓ When I was a child, my home had a big computer, so I learned to type on that keyboard when I was about six years old and I really loved it.
Errors: wrong verb tenses and forms ('watch shines' is incorrect and removed; 'have' should be past 'had'; 'I'm learn to typing' should be past 'learned to type'); article and word order issues. Suggestions: Use past tense for past events, use 'learned to type' (verb + infinitive), and correct word order to 'When I was a child, my home had...'. Grammar problem type ID: 5
× So happy with that.
✓ I was very happy about that.
Errors: sentence fragment without subject and verb; incorrect tense for past context. Suggestions: Use a full sentence with subject and past tense verb 'I was very happy about that' to match previous past events. Grammar problem type ID: 23
× I think the way to improve the typing is spend time with that.
✓ I think the way to improve typing is to spend time practicing.
Errors: missing 'to' before infinitive 'spend', awkward preposition 'with that'. Suggestions: Use 'to spend time practicing' or 'is to practice regularly' to express method of improvement. Grammar problem type ID: 6
× I think a many skill we need to spend some time with that and we need to try to learn about the muscle memory of our hand and how to bring learning of that typical typing of our hand control.
✓ I think many skills require time to develop, and we need to try to learn about the muscle memory of our hands and how to develop typical typing control.
Errors: incorrect quantifier 'a many skill' (use 'many skills'), awkward phrasing 'spend some time with that', singular/plural mismatch 'hand' should be 'hands', and unclear phrase 'bring learning of that typical typing of our hand control'. Suggestions: Use 'many skills' and clearer verbs like 'require time to develop' and 'develop typing control' to convey meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 14