Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly edit and share notes on my phone when studying, which saves time compared with rewriting pages by hand.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer first, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (e.g. 'tablet', 'I type on a desktop'). Remove hesitations and repeated phrases.

Example: I type on a desktop every day because I don't own a laptop. I also sometimes use my tablet or phone for quick messages, but for longer tasks I prefer the desktop keyboard since it is more comfortable.

Suggestion: Give a precise time frame and a concise explanation of how you learned. Use past tense correctly and avoid filler words. Provide one specific detail about the classes or duration.

Example: I learned to type during my school computer classes when I was about 12. The lessons taught touch-typing basics and after several months of practice I could type much more accurately and quickly.

Suggestion: Describe concrete methods you used to improve and give a specific example of practice. Use clear grammar and avoid vague statements and hesitations.

Example: I improved my typing by practicing daily with online typing exercises and timed tests. For instance, I spent 20 minutes each day on a typing website and after a month my speed increased from 30 to 55 words per minute.

× Well I prefer both, but if I have to choose one then I would definitely prefer typing over handwriting as it is very easy to type and I've type very fast in mobile phone as well.

✓ Well, I prefer both, but if I have to choose one, I would definitely prefer typing over handwriting because it is very easy to type and I type very fast on my mobile phone as well.

The original sentence has tense and preposition issues. 'I've type' is incorrect: the present perfect auxiliary 'have' must be followed by a past participle (typed), but the intended meaning is simple present 'I type'. Also use 'on my mobile phone' not 'in mobile phone'. Added commas for clarity and replaced 'as' with 'because' for clearer cause. Suggestion: use simple present to describe regular ability (I type), and use 'on' with devices.

× Well, I don't have laptop that's why I type on desktop.

✓ Well, I don't have a laptop, so I type on a desktop.

Missing indefinite articles: English requires 'a laptop' and 'a desktop' when referring to one unspecified item. Also 'that's why' is more naturally replaced by 'so' here. Suggestion: include 'a' before singular countable nouns and use commas to separate clauses.

× It's umm. I do have tab where I can type in desktop in mobile phone as well.

✓ I do have a tablet where I can also type, and I can type on my mobile phone as well.

Original is fragmented and omits articles and correct device names. 'tab' should be 'a tablet'. 'type in desktop' is incorrect preposition and noun form; use 'type on a desktop' or 'type on my mobile phone'. Reordered for clarity and fluency. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and use correct articles and prepositions for devices.

× I type in desktop and it's very easy and convenient to type in desktop.

✓ I type on a desktop, and it's very easy and convenient to type on a desktop.

Use 'on a desktop' not 'in desktop'. Also include the indefinite article 'a' for singular countable nouns. Repetition kept for emphasis but corrected preposition and article. Suggestion: use 'on' with keyboards/devices and include 'a'.

× Umm also I also wanted to like to type in keyboard as well.

✓ I also like to type on a keyboard.

Original contains unnecessary repetition and wrong tense ('wanted to like to'). Use simple present 'I like to type' to express preference. Use 'on a keyboard' for correct preposition and include an article. Suggestion: remove filler words and redundant phrases.

× So back in school, uh, we used to have computer classes and, uh, like going to the computer classes make me learn how to type on keyboards and it's very easy and convenient for me to type in keyboards after all, like after it does.

✓ So back in school, we used to have computer classes, and going to those classes helped me learn how to type on a keyboard, and it's very easy and convenient for me to type on a keyboard now.

Original has verb form and tense mismatches: 'make me learn' should be past 'helped me learn' or 'made me learn.' 'keyboards' should be singular 'a keyboard' when speaking generally, and 'type in keyboards' uses wrong preposition. 'after it does' is ungrammatical and unclear; replaced with 'now' to indicate current ability. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for past learning experiences and use 'on' with keyboards.

× All this year I have been learning.

✓ All year I have been learning.

'All this year' is acceptable in spoken English but 'All year' is more natural. The present perfect continuous 'have been learning' is acceptable for ongoing action; no change in tense required other than phrasing. Suggestion: prefer 'All year I have been learning' for clarity.

× Umm, to be honest, I have like a very issue at the beginning, but later on I like the habit to make it, uh, very, uh, good.

✓ To be honest, I had a lot of issues at the beginning, but later on I developed the habit and it became much better.

Original uses incorrect noun phrase 'a very issue' and mixes tenses and awkward constructions ('like the habit to make it very good'). Use past tense 'had' for past difficulty and 'developed the habit' to show change. 'Became much better' is a natural way to describe improvement. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases ('a lot of issues') and consistent past tense for past events.

× The practice make it some uh, the practice make it improve my typing.

✓ Practice helped improve my typing.

Subject-verb agreement and redundant phrasing: 'The practice make' is incorrect; use 'practice helped' or 'practicing helped'. Also remove repetition. Use singular 'practice' as an uncountable noun with singular verb. Suggestion: use 'practice' or 'practicing' with appropriate verbs (helps/helped) and avoid repeating the same idea.