Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity: use correct tense and articles, avoid repetitions, and make a concise topic sentence followed by one clear reason. Keep it under 5 sentences. Add linking phrase for coherence.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is unclear. For example, when I type, my notes are neater and easier for others to read. Therefore, typing is more convenient for both schoolwork and work documents.

Suggestion: Work on tense consistency, sentence structure, and removing fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence (desktop or laptop), then give one or two concise supporting details using linking words like "because" or "also". Avoid unnecessary repetition and fillers (uh, um).

Example: I usually typed on a laptop keyboard every day when I worked as an auditor because we frequently visited clients and used portable computers. Also, many audit tasks required working with spreadsheets and reports on the laptop.

Suggestion: Make the answer direct and grammatically correct. Give a clear time reference and one brief supporting detail. Remove hesitations and correct verb forms.

Example: I learned to type when I was in Year 5 after my mother gave me my first iPad. From that time I practiced regularly on apps and school assignments, which helped me improve.

Suggestion: Organize into a concise topic sentence plus specific examples. Use correct verb forms and linking words (for example, such as) to make details clearer. Avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice. For example, I type my diary entries, work notes, and short practice exercises every day, which increases my speed and accuracy.

× I think I would love to typing more than handwriting because my handwriting is really bad and when I try typing a thing IA lot more convenient and the reader is a will understand my proposed more clearly.

✓ I think I would love typing more than handwriting because my handwriting is really bad, and when I try to type something it is a lot more convenient and the reader will understand my proposals more clearly.

Errors: incorrect use of gerund after 'would love' (should be base verb or gerund? 'would love to' + base verb or 'love' + -ing). Also 'try typing a thing' should be 'try to type something'. 'IA' likely typo for 'it is'. 'a will understand' wrong word order and modal. 'proposed' wrong word choice/form; use 'proposals' or 'what I have written'. Suggestion: use 'would love to type' or 'love typing'; use 'try to type something'; ensure correct word order for modal verbs and subjects; choose correct noun 'proposals' or 'what I propose'.

× I would say I used to type on a laptop keyboard everyday when I was working as auditor because when we working, we will interviewing our client, uh, while we typing at the same time.

✓ I would say I used to type on a laptop keyboard every day when I was working as an auditor because when we were working, we would interview our clients while we were typing at the same time.

Errors: 'everyday' used instead of 'every day' (adjective vs adverb) relates to article but mainly tense and form. Missing past progressive 'were working'; incorrect future/modal 'will interviewing' should be 'would interview' or simple past; 'we typing' needs past progressive 'we were typing'; 'auditor' needs article 'an auditor'; 'client' should be plural 'clients'. Suggestion: maintain past continuous for simultaneous actions and use correct article and spacing.

× And also we use, uh, computers at one op, uh, as one of our, our, our job and, and that's, and the computer.

✓ Also, we used computers as part of our job, and that's why we used the computer.

Errors: unclear phrase 'at one op' and repetitive fillers; article use: 'the computer' appropriate when referring to a specific reason. Simplify to clear past tense and correct article 'the' for referring back. Suggestion: remove fillers and use concise phrasing: 'we used computers as part of our job.'

× Uh, just watch. This was when I have my first, uh, my first iPad when I was in Year 5 because my mom gave me an iPad so I able to type on the keyboard.

✓ I learned just by watching. This was when I got my first iPad in Year 5 because my mom gave me an iPad, so I was able to type on the keyboard.

Errors: tense mismatch: 'have my first' should be past 'got' or 'had'; 'I able' missing auxiliary 'was able' for past ability. 'Just watch' unclear — use 'by watching'. Suggestion: use past simple for past events and 'was able to' for ability in the past.

× I improve by practicing, so if I want to be good at typing, so I practicing every day.

✓ I improve by practicing, so if I want to be good at typing, I practice every day.

Errors: unnecessary 'so' and incorrect verb form 'I practicing' missing auxiliary; use simple present 'I practice' for habitual actions. Suggestion: remove redundant conjunctions and use base verb for habitual statements.

× Like typing my day, my diary, my work and anything else in my mind, that's how I practice.

✓ For example, typing about my day, my diary, my work, and anything else on my mind; that's how I practice.

Errors: missing preposition 'about' or 'on' to clarify what is typed; 'my day' needs 'about my day' or 'writing about my day'; article usage acceptable but preposition missing. Suggestion: use 'typing about my day' or 'writing in my diary' and correct prepositions to convey meaning.