Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接，且给出了原因，但有一些冠词、搭配和表达问题：应说“take a bus”和“sit by the window”，而不是“take bus”和“sit by window”；“the landscapes of the home city”表达不自然，因为你是在参观新城市，可以改为“the scenery of the city”。另外，“Yes, of course”略显重复，可以用更自然的“Yes, definitely”。建议使用“观点 + 原因 + 具体结果”的结构，并补充一个更具体的景色例子。

Example: Yes, definitely. I prefer sitting by the window because I can enjoy the scenery while I’m travelling. For example, when I visit a new city by bus, I like watching the streets, buildings, and countryside along the way.

Suggestion: 回答的开头直接，但最后一句“We saw.”没有完成，导致内容不完整，也没有提供旅行中的具体经历。“in the national state”用词不准确且不自然；可以改为“when I was about ten years old”或直接说“about 15 years ago”。此外，应明确说明旅途中看到了什么、做了什么以及这次旅行给你的感受。建议使用“旅行事实 + 具体活动或景色 + 感受”的结构，并控制在3—4个完整句子内。

Example: Yes, I did. About 15 years ago, when I was a child, my father took my grandmother and me to Inner Mongolia for a week. We visited the grasslands, rode horses, and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. It was a memorable trip because it was my first long journey with my family.

× When I visit a new city, I often take bus and sit by window to see the landscapes of the home city.

✓ When I visit a new city, I often take a bus and sit by the window to see the landscapes of the home city.

“bus”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”，所以应说“take a bus”。“window”在这里指特定的车窗，需要使用定冠词“the”，所以应说“sit by the window”。

× We saw.

✓ We saw many beautiful places.

“see”通常是及物动词，后面需要接宾语。“We saw.”缺少宾语，句子结构不完整。可以补充“many beautiful places”等具体内容。