Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答观点明确，也提供了多个理由，内容比较充实。不过有一些明显的语法和用词问题：将“when I was traveled”改为“when I travel”或“when I’m travelling”；“the scary go by”应为“the scenery go by”；“videos off view”应为“videos of the view”。另外，理由较多时可以使用“Besides”或“Moreover”连接，使表达更自然。

Example: Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when I’m travelling. I love watching the scenery go by, and it feels more comfortable and private. Besides, I can take photos and videos of the view, and I can rest my head against the window if I want to take a nap.

Suggestion: 回答直接回答了问题，并提供了旅行方式和活动细节，结构基本完整。但“memorable train january”表达不清，应该改为具体的旅行经历，例如“a memorable train journey to Otter City”；“boast with my family”用词错误，应改为“bond with my family”或“spend time with my family”。“memorable”与“still remember”同时使用有些重复，可以删去一个。建议明确说明一次旅行的时间、地点或感受，并用“For example”和“Sometimes”自然衔接。

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my family often took long road trips during the school holidays. I still remember a memorable train journey to Otter City, where we explored new places and enjoyed spending time together. Sometimes, we also travelled by bus or plane, which made our holidays more exciting.

× Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when I was traveled.

✓ Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when I travel.

问题中的“was traveled”使用了过去时，而且与前面的“一般偏好”不一致。回答一般性的喜好时，应使用一般现在时“when I travel”。建议谈论习惯、偏好和事实时使用一般现在时。

× Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when I was traveled.

✓ Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when I travel.

“I was traveled”是错误的被动语态，因为“travel”在这里表示“我旅行”，主语“I”是动作的执行者，不应使用被动语态。应改为主动形式“I travel”。

× Plus I can take photos or videos off view and it's nice to rest my head against the window if I want to take a nap.

✓ Plus, I can take photos or videos of the view, and it's nice to rest my head against the window if I want to take a nap.

表示“景色的照片或视频”时，应使用介词“of”，构成“photos or videos of the view”。“off view”不是正确的搭配。建议记住“a photo/video of something”这一固定表达。

× For example, I used to take a long road trip during school holidays and I still remember memorable train january to Otter City.

✓ For example, I used to take a long road trip during school holidays, and I still remember a memorable train journey to Otter City.

“journey”是单数可数名词，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。因此应说“a memorable train journey”。另外，“january”不能表达这句话中的“旅程”，正确词语应为“journey”。