Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason). Remove filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words for coherence and give one or two specific supporting details about what you like to see from the window. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I enjoy the scenery. For example, when I fly or take the train I like watching landscapes and city views pass by. Also, sitting by the window helps me relax and makes the journey more interesting.

Suggestion: Clarify the time frame and meaning. Begin with a direct answer (Yes/No + brief context), then give a concise supporting detail about a specific childhood trip or explain family living situation if relevant. Avoid repetition and vague age references. Use linking words (for example, however, because) to make the response logical.

Example: Yes, I went on several long journeys with my family when I was a child. For example, we often drove for several hours to visit relatives in another city during summer holidays. Those trips helped me get closer to my cousins and I remember looking forward to them every year.

× 'I'd like to see it by the window while traveling because you're I am able to see you know, I can barely see what's my insides of my eyesight, especially the view.'

✓ 'I'd like to sit by the window while traveling because I can see the view better.'

'Errors: mixed and incorrect verb forms and pronoun use (confusion between "you're" and "I am"), redundant phrases, and unclear wording. Reason: The student used incorrect pronouns and unnecessary fragments that break present-tense meaning. Suggestion: Use a simple present modal construction for preference (I'd like) plus present ability (I can) and concise noun phrase for the object (the view). Replace "see it by the window" with "sit by the window" and remove unclear phrases like "what's my insides of my eyesight".'

× 'I'd really have a long journey because you know, I leave them. I, I, I live together with my parents and I was a baby up until now at my 30 ish.'

✓ 'I used to take long journeys with my family because I lived with my parents when I was a child, up until I was about thirty.'

'Errors: incorrect tense sequence and mixed present/past forms ("I'd really have," "I leave them," "I live together" and "I was a baby up until now at my 30 ish"). Reason: Describing past habitual actions requires past tense (used to / simple past). The phrase "up until now at my 30 ish" is ungrammatical and unclear. Suggestion: Use "used to" or simple past to describe past habits (I used to take long journeys), use "lived" for past residence, and express age clearly (when I was about thirty). Avoid repetition and filler words.'