Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap doğal ama dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi üzerinde çalışmalısınız. "prefer sit" yerine "prefer to sit" ve "watching the wheel" ifadesi anlamsal olarak yanlış; muhtemelen "scenery" ya da "view" demek istediniz. Cümle yapısını düzeltin ve neden tercih ettiğinizi kısa destekleyici detaylarla bağlaç kullanarak açıklayın (ör. "because" ve "however"). Ayrıca maksimum 5 cümleyi aşmayan, akıcı ve tutarlı bir yanıt oluşturun.

Example: I usually prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I enjoy watching the scenery. However, if I travel with family or friends I sometimes choose an aisle seat so I can talk to them more easily. Sitting by the window helps me relax and pass the time, especially on long journeys.

Suggestion: Cevabınız olumlu ancak zaman uyumu, cümle yapısı ve ayrıntı eksikliği var. "used to" doğru, fakat "which is long journey" yerine "which involved long journeys" ya da "and we often had long journeys" demelisiniz. Ayrıca tek bir kısa cümleyle bitirmeyip spesifik örnekler verin (nerelere gittiniz, ne yaptınız). Bağlaçlar (e.g. "for example", "such as", "and") ile cümleleri daha akıcı bağlayın. Yanıtı 3 cümle civarında tutun ve detay verin.

Example: Yes, when I was a child my family often took long journeys for our holidays. For example, we drove for several hours to visit the coast and stayed in small seaside towns. We did many activities such as going to ice cream shops, visiting local markets and swimming at the beach.

× I usually prefer sit by the window because I like watching the wheel when I'm travelling, but it depends when I'm travelling with my family or friends.

✓ I usually prefer sitting by the window because I like watching the view when I'm travelling, but it depends when I'm travelling with my family or friends.

Use the gerund after the verb 'prefer' when followed by another verb: 'prefer sitting' not 'prefer sit'. Also 'watching the wheel' is odd in context; 'view' is more natural. To improve, practise verbs that require gerunds (prefer + -ing) and replace unlikely nouns with context-appropriate ones (wheel -> view).

× Yes, I used to go on holiday with my family which is long journey when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I used to go on holiday with my family on long journeys when I was a child.

The relative clause 'which is long journey' is ungrammatical and the sentence needs plural 'journeys' to match 'used to go'. Also use the preposition 'on' with 'journey'. To improve, use 'on long journeys' or 'on a long journey' and ensure agreement between countable nouns and determiners.

× It was very beautiful places and we did so many things we went to ice cream shop and so many

✓ There were very beautiful places, and we did so many things; we went to ice cream shops and many other places.

Mixes singular/plural and lacks correct verb 'there were' for existence; 'beautiful' should modify 'places' correctly and plural 'shops' needed. Also sentence fragments need punctuation and parallel structure. To improve, use 'there were' for describing plural nouns, ensure adjective-noun agreement, and break long ideas into clearer clauses.