Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 语法与用词需改进，回答结构要更自然且简洁。具体：1) 将动词和冠词错误纠正（例如：‘see by the window’ → ‘sit by the window to look out’; ‘the travelling’ → ‘travelling’或‘traveling’）；2) 使用更合适的形容词和原因连接词（例如：‘it makes me feel safe’；用because/so/which to连接）；3) 避免冗长重复，限定在3–4句内并提供一两个具体细节。练习时可模仿示例句的节奏与连贯性。

Example: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel because it makes me feel safer and more relaxed. I enjoy watching the changing landscape — for example, fields and mountains — which helps me pass the time. So I often choose a window seat whenever possible.

Suggestion: 需要改进时态和细节表达，同时增加连贯的连接词。具体：1) 注意过去时（took → took, visit → visited）；2) 用更具体的细节丰富回答（例如提及某个景点或活动）；3) 用连接词（for example, because, which）让句子更流畅。保持回答在3–4句内并突出一个难忘的细节。

Example: Yes, we often took long journeys during Chinese New Year when I was a child. I remember one trip to Tainan that was especially memorable because we visited many historical temples and tried local snacks. That experience gave me a strong interest in traditional culture.

× Yes, I prefer to see by the window when the travelling because it make me feel safety and also I can see the old view.

✓ Yes, I prefer sitting by the window when travelling because it makes me feel safe and I can also see the old view.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式、第三人称单数、形容词/副词选择与词序。 1) “prefer to see” 在表示偏好时更自然的结构是 prefer + -ing（或 prefer to + 动词皆可，但搭配位置需改）：此句中应使用 'prefer sitting by the window' 或 'prefer to sit by the window'；两者都可，此处统一为 -ing 形式。 2) 不定冠词/冠词位置：原句中 'the travelling' 不需要定冠词且 travelling 不可数，正确为 'travelling'。 3) 主谓一致与时态：'it make' 主语 it 第三人称单数，动词应为 makes。 4) 形容词/副词：'feel safety' 错误，应该用形容词 'safe' 表示感觉安全。若使用名词则为 'feel a sense of safety'。 5) 词序与衔接：'also I can see the old view' 更自然的顺序是 'I can also see the old view'。 改进建议：注意 prefer 后可接动词-ing；主语为第三人称单数时动词加 -s；feel 后接形容词表示感觉；避免在不可数或泛指名词前误用定冠词。

× Yes, we usually took long journey during Chinese New Year. I remember once we went to Tainan, it was an unforgettable trip because we visit many cultural attraction.

✓ Yes, we usually took long journeys during Chinese New Year. I remember once we went to Tainan; it was an unforgettable trip because we visited many cultural attractions.

错误类型：过去时使用与名词复数形式、动词过去式和名词复数。 1) 'long journey' 在泛指多次发生的可数名词情境下应使用复数 'long journeys'，因为前面有 usually 表示习惯性的多次行为。 2) 'we visit' 描述过去发生的事情，应使用过去式 'we visited'。 3) 'cultural attraction' 为可数名词，既然说的是多处景点，应使用复数 'cultural attractions'。 改进建议：当描述过去反复发生的习惯可以用过去式加复数名词；讲述过去具体事件（we went to Tainan）之后，句中其他动词也应保持过去时态一致；注意可数名词单复数一致。