Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn tự nhiên nhưng cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp/phát âm. Cụ thể: 1) Mở đầu nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, ví dụ “Yes, I prefer to sit by the window.” 2) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như “is gives” → “it gives” và loại bỏ từ thừa (“and OK”). 3) Thêm một câu chi tiết ngắn liên kết bằng liên từ (e.g., “because” hoặc “so”) để giải thích lý do. 4) Giữ không quá 4–5 câu, dùng từ vựng phù hợp như “scenery”, “privacy”, “relax”.

Example: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I enjoy watching the scenery outside. When I travel to new places, a window seat gives me a bit of privacy so I can relax and unwind. For example, I like seeing changing landscapes like mountains or coastlines while listening to music.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng chứa lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc dài, nên tách thành câu rõ ràng. Cụ thể: 1) Tránh từ sai như “earn” (không đúng) — dùng “been on” hoặc “taken”. 2) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn: “No, I didn’t have any long journeys with my family.” 3) Dùng liên từ để nối lý do và mong muốn: “but” / “however” / “and I hope”. 4) Nên nêu một ví dụ ngắn hoặc thời gian cụ thể để chi tiết hóa. Giữ tổng số câu ≤5 và sử dụng từ vựng như “memories”, “family trip”, “childhood”.

Example: No, I didn’t have any long journeys with my family when I was a child. However, I hope we can take a long trip together soon because I think travelling is a great way to create lasting memories. For example, I would love to go on a road trip to the coast where we could spend time exploring beaches and taking photos.

× Especially when I'm traveling somewhere new is gives me a little bit of personal space so I can just sit back, relax and OK.

✓ Especially when I'm traveling somewhere new it gives me a little bit of personal space so I can just sit back, relax and so on.

There is an extra 'is' before the verb 'gives', causing an ungrammatical sequence. Remove 'is' to form the correct clause 'it gives'. Also 'OK' is informal and unclear in this context; use 'so on' or omit it. Suggestion: ensure the subject 'it' is present before the verb and avoid inserting unnecessary auxiliary verbs. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Actually no, I don't think I had earn any particularly long journey with my family when I was a child and I hope in the near future my family will go on a long trip together as I think it is a good way for us to save memories.

✓ Actually no, I don't think I had any particularly long journeys with my family when I was a child, and I hope in the near future my family will go on a long trip together because I think it is a good way for us to make memories.

Errors include incorrect verb form 'had earn' (nonsensical). Use past perfect/simple past appropriately: 'had any' or simply 'had any particularly long journeys'. Also 'journey' should be plural when referring to more than one trip. 'Save memories' is incorrect collocation; use 'make memories'. Connect clauses with a comma and 'and' or 'because' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct past tense forms and common collocations like 'make memories'. Grammar problem type ID:5