Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I prefer window seats), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, um), repetition and incorrect phrases. Use accurate vocabulary (window seat, scenery, nature) and keep to 2–4 sentences. For example, say why you like views and any practical benefits (privacy, leaning against the window).

Example: Yes, I prefer a window seat when travelling. I like it because I can enjoy the scenery and take photos as we pass interesting places. Also, having the window gives me more privacy and somewhere to lean on for a short nap.

Suggestion: Be direct and clear. Begin with a direct answer (No, I haven't had a long journey with my family as a child) and then add one or two specific details or reasons. Avoid unnecessary names or unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and provide a brief example or consequence. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Example: No, I didn't have a long journey with my family when I was a child. We usually stayed close to home for short visits, so I never experienced long road trips or holidays abroad as a child.

× Yes officer, I prefer window seater while traveling because, uh from the wind window suite, we can see the beautiful uh scene, which is uh, which is created by the natures uh uh, we can enjoy, we can enjoy the nature. Also. I prefer the I prefer window when traveling that's it.

✓ Yes officer, I prefer the window seat while traveling because from the window we can see the beautiful scenery created by nature, and we can enjoy it. I prefer the window when traveling.

Problems: wrong word choices and repetitive filler words. 'Window seater' and 'wind window suite' are incorrect; the correct noun is 'window seat'. 'Beautiful uh scene' should be 'beautiful scenery'. 'Created by the natures' should be 'created by nature' (singular). Multiple repetitions like 'we can enjoy, we can enjoy the nature' and 'I prefer the I prefer' are redundant and interrupt fluency. Suggestions: use correct collocations ('window seat', 'from the window', 'beautiful scenery'), remove fillers and repetitions, and combine clauses for clarity (use commas and conjunctions). Keep verb forms consistent (present simple for preferences).

× Uh, no, Abhishek, until now I haven't, uh, that one's good. Uh, good journey with my family in a long, long journey because uh, till now I haven't gone anywhere with my family for the long tour or the for long medicine.

✓ No, Abhishek, I have not had a long journey with my family so far because until now I have not gone on a long tour with my family.

Problems: incorrect tense use and awkward phrasing. The speaker is referring to experiences up to now, so present perfect ('have not had', 'have not gone') is appropriate instead of simple past. Phrases like 'that one's good', 'for the long tour or the for long medicine' are unclear and incorrect. Suggestions: use clear expressions for experience ('have not had a long journey', 'gone on a long tour'), remove unclear fragments, and maintain present perfect for actions up to the present; use preposition 'on' with 'tour' ('gone on a tour').