Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, give 1–2 specific reasons, use linking words, and avoid unclear phrases. Correct verb forms, articles and vocabulary (e.g., 'when I travel', 'window seat', 'what's the point of standing'). Keep it to 2–4 sentences and eliminate mistaken words like 'pay Israel'.

Example: I usually prefer a window seat when I travel because I enjoy the view and find it relaxing. For example, on flights I like watching the landscape and clouds, which helps me feel calm. Also, having the window lets me rest my head against the side and avoid being disturbed.

Suggestion: Organize into a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 specific supporting details. Fix grammar (simple past for childhood experiences), choose precise vocabulary (e.g., 'long trip', 'parents'), and use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to make your answer coherent. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, I had several long trips with my parents when I was a child. For example, we once drove for two days to visit my grandparents; during that trip we played games in the car and talked a lot, which made it a very memorable family experience.

× When I traveling, I usually try to take the window seats, because what is the point of troubling, right?

✓ When I am traveling, I usually try to take the window seat, because what is the point of struggling, right?

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'traveling' causes an ungrammatical clause. Use 'am traveling' for present continuous. Also 'window seats' should be singular 'window seat' to match 'I' taking one seat, and 'troubling' is incorrect word choice; 'struggling' or 'bothering' fits the context. Suggestion: use 'I am traveling' and choose the correct noun and verb ('window seat' and 'struggling' or 'bothering').

× I want to enjoy the nature by viewing, so I will pay Israel for that.

✓ I want to enjoy nature by looking out, so I will pay for that.

Incorrect preposition and phrasing: 'enjoy the nature' is unnatural; use 'enjoy nature' without 'the'. 'By viewing' is awkward; 'by looking out' or 'by watching the scenery' is better. 'Pay Israel' is likely a mischoice; if meant 'pay extra' or 'pay for that', use 'pay for that'. Suggestion: remove 'the' before 'nature', replace 'viewing' with 'looking out' or 'watching the scenery', and correct 'pay Israel' to 'pay for that' or specify pay whom/what.

× Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

✓ Did you have long journeys with your family as a child?

Question uses past tense auxiliary 'Did', so the main verb should be base form 'have' (already correct). The original is acceptable, but if asking about repeated events, plural 'journeys' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'long journeys' to refer to multiple trips in childhood.

× Yeah, Shi, we do have a law journey with my parent is what a really great fun travel ever So all the trail.

✓ Yes, we did have a long journey with my parents; it was a really great trip for us.

Many pronoun and word choice errors: 'Shi' unclear—use 'yes'. 'we do have' should be past 'we did have' to match reference to childhood. 'law journey' is a misspelling of 'long journey'. 'my parent' should be plural 'my parents'. 'is what a really great fun travel ever' is ungrammatical; use 'it was a really great trip for us.' Suggestion: correct tense to past, fix pluralization, and reorder into a clear past statement.

× We have a lot of prompt to straw as a family.

✓ We had a lot of opportunities to travel as a family.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and contains wrong word choices: 'prompt to straw' makes no sense. Likely intended 'opportunities to travel'. Also use past tense 'had' to match childhood context. Suggestion: replace with 'We had a lot of opportunities to travel as a family.'

× Uh, we have to discuss why should we go and we really have a lot of fun time with.

✓ We used to discuss why we should go, and we really had a lot of fun together.

Incorrect word order in embedded question: 'why should we go' should be 'why we should go' when used as a complement. Tense should be past to refer to childhood: 'used to discuss' or 'used to talk about'. 'have a lot of fun time with' is ungrammatical; use 'had a lot of fun together.' Suggestion: change word order to 'why we should go', adjust tense to past, and use 'together' instead of 'with.'