Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear. Start with a concise topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid hesitation words (uh, um) and incorrect word choices (e.g. "buy car/buy a bus"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" properly. Keep it within 3–4 short sentences.

Example: Yes. I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing landscapes. For example, I like seeing farms and small villages pass by, which helps me relax. Sometimes I also take a few photos if something interesting appears.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a specific reason and short example. Correct grammar: use "take photos" -> "take photos of the scenery" and avoid vague phrases like "good for me and great for me." Use linking words such as "because" and "for example." Limit to 2–3 sentences and be coherent.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember interesting views. For example, last month I photographed a colourful sunset over the hills and later showed it to my friends.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference with a concise reason and a specific supporting detail. Eliminate filler sounds and correct unclear phrases (e.g. "go to this year"). Use linking words like "because" and add an example or short description to support your opinion. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer the sea because I find the sound of waves calming and I can swim there. For instance, I usually spend a weekend at the beach during summer to relax and swim with friends.

× Oh, when I uh, buy car or buy a bus, uh, I prefer look the window because, uh, it's very beautiful if you uh, that's why when I look at the window, I feel great on the about.

✓ Oh, when I, uh, buy a car or a bus, uh, I prefer to look out of the window because, uh, it's very beautiful; that's why when I look out of the window, I feel great.

Errors: missing articles before 'car' and 'bus' (Article errors, ID 22), incorrect verb form 'prefer look' should be 'prefer to look' (Verb + infinitive issue categorized under Verb form errors / Sentence structure, use ID 26), incorrect preposition 'look the window' should be 'look out of the window' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11), extraneous phrase 'on the about' is ungrammatical (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Suggestion: Use articles 'a' before singular countable nouns, use 'prefer to + base verb' or 'prefer + -ing' (prefer to look or prefer looking), use 'look out of' or 'look out the window', and remove unclear phrases. Keep tense consistent in present simple for habitual actions.

× Yes, I like take photos of this Canary outside the car window because it is good for me and great for me. When I was at home, I checked my phone and I looked.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window because it is enjoyable for me. When I am at home, I check my phone and look at them.

Errors: missing 'to' after 'like' when followed by a verb (Modal/verb form issue categorized under Verb + -ing or infinitive, ID 8), misuse of 'this Canary' (probably wrong word; 'scenery' is correct — Incorrect use of nouns/word choice, mapped to Sentence structure/errors, ID 26), inconsistent tense 'When I was at home, I checked' should match habitual present 'When I am at home, I check' (Present tense issue, ID 6). Also 'I looked' is incomplete; clarify object 'them' referring to photos or scenery (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). Suggestion: use 'like to take' or 'like taking', choose correct noun 'scenery', keep present simple for habitual actions, and use pronouns to refer clearly to photos or scenery.

× I prefer, uh, the sea because when I go to the sea, uh, I, uh, I feel great myself. Uh, that's why sometimes, uh, I go to this year.

✓ I prefer the sea because when I go to the sea, I feel great. That's why sometimes I go there every year.

Errors: unnecessary reflexive 'myself' (Incorrect reflexive pronoun use, ID 15), awkward phrase 'go to this year' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'go there every year' (Sentence structure error, ID 26). Suggestion: remove unnecessary reflexive pronouns unless reflexive is needed, use 'there' to refer back to the sea, and add 'every year' if the meaning is annual habit. Keep present simple to express preferences and habitual actions.