Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitation words, and use correct verb forms. Add one or two specific supporting details linked logically (use linking words such as “because” or “so”). Keep the answer under five sentences.

Example: Yes. I usually prefer to sit next to the window when I travel by car or plane because I enjoy looking at the scenery. For example, I like watching the changing landscape while listening to music, which helps me relax and avoid talking to other passengers.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use correct tense and word forms, and organise reasons with linking words. Mention frequency clearly (e.g., “sometimes”, “often”) and give a specific example of a photo you take.

Example: Not often — sometimes I take photos of the sunset because the colours are beautiful. For example, last month I photographed a bright orange sunset through the car window while driving along a coastal road.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., “because” and “for example”). Correct common errors (e.g., say “I prefer the beach/sea” and “I can do activities such as swimming and volleyball”). Avoid filler words and keep it concise.

Example: I prefer the sea because I can do many activities there in summer, such as swimming and beach volleyball. For example, at the beach I enjoy the warm sun, the coconut trees, and the relaxed atmosphere that helps me unwind.

× Yes, umm, the person who uh, always to sit next to the window at the at the scenery when I'm trying traveling by car, plane post because I think I'm the introverts person.

✓ Yes, umm, I always sit next to the window when I travel by car or plane because I think I am an introverted person.

Original sentence misused 'the person who' and mixed pronouns and noun phrases, causing awkwardness. Use the subject pronoun 'I' to state a personal habit. Also 'introverts person' is incorrect; use the adjective 'introverted' with 'person' or simply 'introverted'. Ensure verb forms match the subject ('I always sit'). Suggestion: Use clear subject pronouns and simple present for habitual actions: 'I always sit next to the window when I travel.'

× So I don't I don't like to talk it with others.

✓ So I don't like to talk with others.

The extra pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here. Use 'talk with others' or 'talk to others'. Remove duplicate 'I don't'. Suggestion: Keep sentences concise and avoid redundant pronouns: 'I don't like to talk with others.'

× So I would like to umm, sit with window and listen to music.

✓ So I would like to sit by the window and listen to music.

Missing article 'the' before 'window' and incorrect preposition 'with'; standard phrase is 'sit by the window' or 'sit at the window'. Use 'the window' because a specific window is implied. Suggestion: Use correct article and preposition: 'sit by the window.'

× Uh, I think it's not, but sometime, uh, I usually take the photo about the sun, sunshine, sunset, uh, because it's very beautiful.

✓ Uh, I don't usually, but sometimes I take photos of the sun or the sunset because they are very beautiful.

Original mixes negation and adverbs incorrectly ('I think it's not' unclear). Use 'I don't usually' or 'I usually don't'; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Take the photo about' is wrong; use 'take photos of'. 'Sun' and 'sunset' are countable/observable, use plural 'photos' and matching pronoun 'they'. Suggestion: Use correct adverb forms and prepositions: 'sometimes I take photos of the sun or the sunset.'

× Or beside that I can taking photo on a plant forest, But uh, I like to listen to music.

✓ Or besides that, I can take photos of a forest or plants, but I like to listen to music.

Use 'besides' instead of 'beside' for 'in addition'. 'Can taking' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' must be followed by base verb 'take'. 'Photo on a plant forest' is ungrammatical; say 'photos of a forest or plants'. Also use comma before 'but'. Suggestion: Use correct modal + base verb and proper nouns: 'I can take photos of a forest.'

× Umm, uh, uh, to be honest, I prefer to see like the beach because in the in the summer I can't play everything activity I want like a swimming or volleyball.

✓ To be honest, I prefer going to the beach because in summer I can do all the activities I want like swimming or playing volleyball.

'Prefer to see like the beach' is incorrect; use 'prefer going to the beach' or 'prefer the beach'. 'I can't play everything activity I want' is ungrammatical: use 'I can do all the activities I want'. 'a swimming' and 'volleyball' need correct forms: 'swimming' (no article) and 'playing volleyball'. Suggestion: Use gerunds for activities and correct collocations: 'do activities like swimming or playing volleyball.'

× So it's very, umm, have the Windies in coconuts and very relaxed and comfortable.

✓ So it's very windy with coconut trees and feels very relaxing and comfortable.

Original uses noun 'Windies' and wrong structure 'have the'. Use adjective 'windy' and phrase 'with coconut trees' or 'with coconuts'. To describe atmosphere, say 'feels very relaxing and comfortable'. Suggestion: Use correct adjective forms and natural collocations: 'very windy with coconut trees; it feels relaxing.'