Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は自然で意味は伝わりますが、以下を改善してください：1) 「umm」のようなフィラーを減らす。2) 繰り返し（“from the window” が重複）を避けて簡潔にする。3) トピックセンテンスを明確にし、理由や具体例を短く付け加える。例えば、座る場所の理由（景色、リラックスできるなど）を一文で述べ、次に具体的な状況（通勤、長距離旅行など）を補足する形にすると好印象です。

Example: Yes. I prefer sitting by the window because I enjoy watching the passing scenery and it helps me relax. For example, on long train journeys I like to observe towns and countryside, which makes the trip more interesting.

Suggestion: 内容は具体的で良いですが、次の点を改善してください：1) 文の繋がりで接続詞を自然に使う（for example, or when）。2) 冗長な表現（"the view that I've never seen before"）を簡潔にする。3) 文法的な前置詞ミスを直す（"outside of car" → "outside the car"）。これでより自然で流暢に聞こえます。

Example: Yes. I often take photos when I see unusual scenery or wildlife outside the car. For example, if I spot a herd of deer or a striking landscape I haven't seen before, I always stop to take a picture.

Suggestion: 答えは率直ですが、構成と表現を改善しましょう：1) 最初の言い方を自然に（"That's a difficult question"）し、フィラーや繰り返し（"I I"）を避ける。2) 比較の構造を明確にし、短い理由と具体例を添える（例：頻度や好きなアクティビティ）。3) 語彙や文法（"started to surfing" → "have recently started surfing"）を正しくする。簡潔に2〜3文でまとめると良いです。

Example: That's a difficult question because I like both. In the mountains I enjoy hiking and the fresh air, while by the sea I've recently started surfing and love the active lifestyle it offers.

× Yes I do, I definitely prefer sitting by the window and umm looking around the center from the window and I can feel more relaxed.

✓ Yes, I do. I definitely prefer sitting by the window and looking around the center from the window; I feel more relaxed.

The sentence had run-on structure and redundant modal 'can' with 'feel'. Use present simple 'feel' to match habitual preference. Also add punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: break into shorter sentences and use present simple for general states.

× I really enjoy traveling by train.

✓ I really enjoy traveling by train.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present simple to express a general preference, which is appropriate.

× Yes I do. I usually take a photo when I come across the scenery if it's unique or the view that I've never seen before.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually take a photo when I come across scenery that is unique or a view I have never seen before.

Use 'scenery' without 'the' when speaking generally. Replace contraction 'it's' with 'that is' or restructure. Use present perfect 'have never seen' correctly. Also remove redundant 'the' before 'scenery' and simplify clause order.

× Or if I find the animals outside of car I definitely take them.

✓ Or if I find animals outside the car, I definitely photograph them.

Use 'outside the car' not 'outside of car'. 'Take them' is ambiguous; use 'photograph them' or 'take pictures of them'. Add comma after introductory clause.

× That it's difficult question for me, I I like both.

✓ That's a difficult question for me. I like both.

Incorrect word order and missing article: use 'That's a difficult question'. Remove duplicated 'I'. Split into two sentences for clarity.

× If I go to mountains, I definitely enjoy hiking on the other side.

✓ If I go to the mountains, I definitely enjoy hiking on the other hand.

Use article 'the' with 'mountains' when speaking generally about that environment. Original 'on the other side' is unclear; 'on the other hand' contrasts with sea, but better: 'I definitely enjoy hiking in the mountains.' Suggestion: 'I definitely enjoy hiking in the mountains.'

× When it comes to sea, I started to surfing recently.

✓ When it comes to the sea, I started surfing recently.

Use 'the sea' with definite article. After 'start' followed by an activity use gerund 'surfing' not 'to surfing'. Present perfect 'have started' can also be used for recent past with present relevance: 'I have started surfing recently.'

× I really love outside activities.

✓ I really love outdoor activities.

Use the adjective 'outdoor' rather than 'outside' before a noun. 'Outside activities' is nonstandard; 'outdoor activities' is the correct collocation.