Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g. tenses, word order) and avoid redundancy like repeating 'because'. Aim for 2–4 sentences, each natural and complete.

Example: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching the passing landscapes, especially trees and houses, because they help me relax and think. For example, seeing green fields often makes me feel calmer during long journeys.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and complete your thought. Give a clear topic sentence and then explain one specific reason with an example. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' and finish the sentence (e.g. 'cannot be recreated'). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery when I travel by car or bus because photos help me preserve special moments. For instance, I once photographed a sunset from a highway and later used the picture as a memory of a family trip.

Suggestion: Answer directly and finish your explanation. Use natural phrases and specific reasons or comparisons. Start with a clear preference sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details linked logically (e.g. 'because' or 'so'). Avoid unfinished sentences and vague expressions like 'vibe of participation'—replace with clearer language.

Example: I prefer the sea because I enjoy watching people swimming and playing on the beach; it feels lively and social. Also, I like swimming myself, so the seaside is more relaxing and fun for me than the mountains.

× Definitely, I always look out through the window while I why I am traveling on bus or even my car because I enjoy the beautiful feel because it makes.

✓ Definitely, I always look out of the window while I am traveling by bus or car because I enjoy the beautiful scenery and the feeling it gives me.

Multiple errors: incorrect preposition 'through' with 'look out' and wrong preposition 'on bus' (use 'out of' and 'by'); unnecessary word 'why' and extra 'because'; awkward noun 'beautiful feel' should be 'beautiful scenery' and unclear clause 'because it makes' needs completion as 'the feeling it gives me'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence structure, remove redundant words, use correct prepositions ('look out of', 'travel by'), and replace vague nouns with appropriate ones ('scenery', 'feeling').

× Definitely, I am always take photos of the scenery when I am traveling through by car or by bus because the pictures can give you memories that cannot.

✓ Definitely, I always take photos of the scenery when I travel by car or bus because the pictures give you memories that last.

Error: incorrect verb form 'am always take' — when expressing habitual actions use simple present 'always take' not 'am' + base verb. Also unnecessary 'through' after 'traveling' and awkward passive phrasing 'can give you memories that cannot' which is incomplete. Use 'travel by' for transport and a clear completion like 'memories that last'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, remove extraneous words, and complete comparative/negation phrases clearly.

× Actually I prefer the sea because I love watching people playing in the water. It gives me vibe of participation. On top of that I'm.

✓ Actually, I prefer the sea because I love watching people play in the water. It gives me a sense of participation. On top of that, I'm more relaxed there.

Issues: 'watching people playing' is acceptable but 'watching people play' is more natural (use base verb after 'watch'); missing article in 'gives me vibe' — should be 'a sense' or 'a vibe'; sentence fragment 'On top of that I'm.' is incomplete. Suggestion: use bare infinitive after perception verbs (watch/hear), include articles when needed, and avoid sentence fragments by completing thoughts.