Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid awkward phrasing, correct grammar, and add one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep to about 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the scenery relaxing. For example, watching the changing countryside or busy city streets makes long journeys more enjoyable and helps lift my mood.

Suggestion: Improve grammar, word choice and clarity. Use correct singular/plural nouns, replace unclear phrases, and provide a brief reason plus a specific example of when you would stop. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: No, I usually don't photograph scenery through a car window because the images often turn out blurry or have reflections. If I see something worth photographing, I would stop the car and get out to take pictures with my camera so I can capture higher-quality shots.

Suggestion: Focus on correcting minor grammar errors and combine sentences for fluency. Give one concrete example of an activity at the seaside to make the answer more specific and natural. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer the sea because I love swimming and it helps me relax. For example, when I visit the coast I go for a long swim and then sit on the beach to unwind, so I usually choose the seaside over the mountains.

× Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the scenery relaxing and it's helped me feel more good.

✓ Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the scenery relaxing and it helps me feel better.

The sentence mixes present simple with a past participle ('it's helped') which is incorrect for a habitual action. Use present simple 'it helps' to match 'I often' and 'I find'. Also 'feel more good' is unidiomatic; use 'feel better'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent for habitual actions and use comparative 'better' instead of 'more good'.

× No, I usually don't take photos of the sceneries through a call window because the pictures often turn out blurry or have reflections from the glass.

✓ No, I usually don't take photos of the scenery through a car window because the pictures often turn out blurry or have reflections from the glass.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'sceneries'. Also 'call window' is a typo; the correct phrase is 'car window'. Suggestion: use uncountable noun 'scenery' and proofread for typos.

× If I see something worse photographing, I prefer to stop, get out of the car and take photos with my camera so I can get better quality shoots.

✓ If I see something worth photographing, I prefer to stop, get out of the car, and take photos with my camera so I can get better-quality shots.

The phrase 'worse photographing' is ungrammatical; the intended expression is 'worth photographing'. 'Better quality' modifying 'shots' should be hyphenated when used as a compound adjective: 'better-quality shots'. Also 'shoots' is the verb form; the noun 'shots' is correct. Suggestion: use the idiom 'worth photographing', hyphenate compound adjectives, and use correct noun 'shots'.

× I prefer the sea because I love swimming. It really improves my moods and make me feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love swimming. It really improves my mood and makes me feel relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'It' requires third-person singular verb 'makes' not 'make'. Also 'moods' is usually singular here ('my mood') when referring to overall emotional state. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with singular subject and use appropriate singular noun for general state.

× When I go to the coast I can exercise and unwind at the same time, so I usually choose the sea over the mountains.

✓ When I go to the coast, I can exercise and unwind at the same time, so I usually choose the sea over the mountains.

No major tense error, but a missing comma after the introductory clause improves readability. The sentence correctly uses present tense for habitual actions. Suggestion: add a comma after 'coast' for correct punctuation and clarity.