Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer direct, coherent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two specific reasons or a short example. Use correct tense and simpler sentence structures to avoid repetition and confusion. Link ideas with words like 'because', 'so', or 'for example'. Also correct grammar mistakes (e.g. 'I like to look out of the window', 'when I was a child', 'I usually sit at the window').

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the passing scenery. For example, when I was a child I used to sit by the window and look at the countryside; it helped me feel relaxed and stopped me from feeling carsick.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly: say yes or no, then explain briefly when and why. Avoid vague words like 'wow' and unclear phrases. Use linking words such as 'if' or 'when' and give a specific example of a situation when you take photos. Keep to two or three short sentences.

Example: Yes, I sometimes take photos of the scenery outside the window, especially when the view is spectacular. For instance, if I see a dramatic mountain or a beautiful sunset, I will photograph it and later post the picture on social media to share the view with my friends.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference with a concise reason and one specific detail. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. 'calming', 'waves', 'sea') and avoid incorrect or confusing phrases like 'good cow vibration'. Use linking words like 'because' and add a short example or feeling to enrich the answer.

Example: I prefer the sea because the sound of the waves is very calming and helps me relax. For example, I enjoy walking along the shore and listening to the water because it clears my mind and reduces stress.

× I would like to window at the scenery when I was a child and being in a car because I sit behind.

✓ I liked looking out the window at the scenery when I was a child and was in the car because I sat in the back.

Multiple sentence structure and tense issues: 'would like to window at' is incorrect verb usage and word order; 'looking out the window' is correct. Tenses were inconsistent: 'I was a child' (past) requires past verbs 'liked' and 'sat'. 'being in a car' should be 'was in the car'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and use correct verb phrase 'look out the window'.

× It's very suitable for me to sit at the scenery of an with the in winter, because sometimes I feel vomiting and it's easy for me to sit at the window at the scenery when I was when I went travelling by the bus or car, but usually.

✓ It is best for me to sit by the window in winter, because I sometimes feel nauseous and it is easier for me to sit by the window when I travel by bus or car.

Confused word order and incorrect word choices: 'sit at the scenery of an with the' is meaningless. Use 'sit by the window' or 'by the window to see the scenery'. 'Feel vomiting' is incorrect; use 'feel nauseous' or 'feel like vomiting'. Tense and structure: change 'when I was when I went travelling' to 'when I travel' or 'when I travelled' depending on intended time; here present general preference uses present simple 'travel'. Suggest using clear phrases and consistent tense.

× What is depend on the situation if the scenario is wow, just look like a wow and unbreakable.

✓ It depends on the situation; if the scenery is amazing and unforgettable, I will take photos.

Incorrect sentence structure and wrong words: 'What is depend on the situation' should be 'It depends on the situation'. 'Scenario' is the wrong noun for landscape; use 'scenery'. 'Wow' and 'unbreakable' are informal and inaccurate; use 'amazing' and 'unforgettable'. Suggest simplifying into two clauses and using correct subject-verb order.

× I would like to take the picture this scenario and post in our social media to give uh whoever not her seeing the place I give it to them to see and give her I can comments.

✓ I would take a picture of the scenery and post it on social media so people who have not seen the place can see it, and I can add a comment.

Many structural and word choice errors: 'take the picture this scenario' should be 'take a picture of the scenery'; 'post in our social media' should be 'post it on social media'. 'Whoever not her seeing' is incorrect pronoun and order; use 'people who have not seen the place'. 'I give it to them to see' is awkward; use 'so they can see it'. Keep sentences concise and use proper relative clauses.

× I prefer to see the sea because the sea is a good cow vibration and the flowing the water is given.

✓ I prefer to see the sea because the sea gives me a good calm feeling and the flowing water is soothing.

Wrong word choices and prepositions: 'good cow vibration' is nonsensical; likely meant 'good calm vibration/feeling'. 'The flowing the water is given' is ungrammatical; use 'the flowing water is soothing' or 'the sound of flowing water is calming'. Use verbs properly ('gives me') and correct noun phrases.

× The sound is for me calm, so I prefer to the sea.

✓ The sound is calming for me, so I prefer the sea.

Incorrect word order and unnecessary preposition 'to' before 'the sea'. 'The sound is for me calm' should be 'The sound is calming for me' or 'The sound calms me'. Remove 'to' and use correct adjective order. Suggest using 'calming' and direct object 'prefer the sea'.