Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Correct tenses and word forms (e.g., 'have never seen', 'I often go to sleep in the car'). Avoid repetition and unnecessary words.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window to see new places I have never seen before. However, if I am tired I often fall asleep during long car journeys, especially in the afternoon.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and be specific about the example. Begin with a clear statement, then use a linking phrase to introduce a concrete example with time reference and sensory details. Remove filler words like 'so'.

Example: Yes, I take photos of scenery that looks unusual or impressive. For example, last month after a storm the clouds opened and the sunset reflected on wet streets, so I stopped to capture the colours with my phone.

Suggestion: Give a direct preference sentence, then support it with two concise, specific reasons. Use natural collocations (e.g., 'wear nice swimwear', 'take photos') and correct adjective order. Avoid repeating 'beautiful'.

Example: I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and relaxing on the beach. I also like wearing nice swimwear and taking photos of the coastline, which makes me feel very happy.

× I prefer to look out the window because I want to search for new views that I never seen.

✓ I prefer to look out the window because I want to search for new views that I have never seen.

The phrase 'never seen' needs the present perfect 'have never seen' to show an experience up to now. Use present perfect when referring to past experiences without a specific time. Suggestion: use 'have never seen' for completed experiences relevant to the present.

× But usually I often when go to sleep when I I'm on the car so.

✓ But usually I fall asleep when I'm in the car.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and redundant: 'usually' and 'often' both indicate frequency, 'when go to sleep' lacks subject and correct verb, and 'on the car' should be 'in the car'. The corrected sentence uses a single frequency adverb 'usually', correct verb 'fall asleep', proper subject 'I', and correct preposition 'in' for being inside a vehicle.

× I like taking photos for the scenery that was special or I have never seen before.

✓ I like taking photos of scenery that is special or that I have never seen before.

Use 'photos of' rather than 'photos for'. The clause 'that was special' mixes past tense with a general present description; use present 'is special'. Keep 'that I have never seen before' in present perfect for past experience. Also add 'that' for clarity.

× For example, I remember one day the rain has gone and cloud in the sky is very beautiful so.

✓ For example, I remember one day the rain had stopped and the clouds in the sky were very beautiful.

The sequence refers to a past memory so use past tenses: 'had stopped' or 'stopped' for the rain, and 'were' for the clouds. Also use plural 'clouds' and include the definite article 'the' before 'clouds' and remove extraneous 'so'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense when recounting past events.

× I prefer sea because I like swimming and I can dress beautiful swim clothes and take beautiful pictures that make me very happy.

✓ I prefer the sea because I like swimming and I can wear beautiful swimwear and take beautiful pictures that make me very happy.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'sea' when speaking generally about preferring sea over mountains. 'Dress beautiful swim clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'wear' and a suitable noun 'swimwear' or 'swimsuit'. Adjective order: 'beautiful swimwear' is correct. These changes make the sentence natural and grammatical.