Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitions and grammar mistakes (e.g., "I look good", "a look out").

Example: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching changing landscapes, especially green fields and old villages, because they feel relaxing and sometimes make me want to stop and explore. For example, last month I saw a beautiful valley that inspired me to plan a weekend trip there.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer, then explain briefly why and include a specific example. Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing (e.g., "I take photos", not "take a note of photos").

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to capture special moments and colours. For instance, I photographed a dramatic sunset from the highway last summer and later shared it with my family; everyone liked it and asked where it was taken.

Suggestion: Answer directly which you prefer (mountains or the sea) and give clear reasons with correct grammar. Keep sentences short and use linking words for coherence. Avoid vague phrases like "the coastal"; use "the coast" or "coastlines."

Example: I prefer the sea because it makes me feel peaceful and relaxed. I enjoy walking along the coast, listening to the waves and breathing fresh air, which helps me unwind after a busy week.

× Yeah, I look good.

✓ Yeah, I look out of the window.

The student used the adjective 'good' incorrectly to mean 'look at something'. Use the phrasal verb 'look out (of) the window' or 'look out the window' to express observing scenery. Also 'look out of the window' is more natural in this context. Suggestion: replace 'look good' with 'look out the window' or 'look out of the window'.

× I like a look out the window at the beautiful scenery as the landscapes are really breathtaking and I I want to make them in my heart and I will want to go there again.

✓ I like looking out the window at the beautiful scenery because the landscapes are really breathtaking, and I want to keep them in my heart; I would like to go there again.

Multiple issues: after 'like' use the gerund 'looking' rather than the noun phrase 'a look'. 'As' can be replaced by 'because' for clarity. 'Make them in my heart' is incorrect; use 'keep them in my heart'. 'I will want to go there again' is awkward for preference—use 'I would like to go there again' or 'I want to go there again'. Suggestions: use gerund after 'like', replace 'as' with 'because', use 'keep' not 'make', and use 'would like' or 'want' for future desire.

× Yes, I take a note of photos of the beautiful scenery outside the car window because I want to capturing the landscapes as well as keep them in my phone or camera and I also like sharing them with my friends and family.

✓ Yes, I take photos of the beautiful scenery outside the car window because I want to capture the landscapes and keep them on my phone or camera, and I also like sharing them with my friends and family.

'Take a note of photos' is incorrect; say 'take photos' or 'make a note'. After 'want to' use the base verb 'capture' (not 'capturing'). Use 'keep them on my phone' (preposition 'on'). Use parallel structure: 'capture... and keep...'. Suggestions: use 'take photos', 'want to capture', and 'keep them on my phone'.

× I prefer the same, mostly because the sea always gave me a sense of peaceful and I like walking alongside the sea, especially the coastal and I really love that it gives me the calm, make me calm.

✓ I prefer the sea, mostly because the sea always gives me a sense of peace, and I like walking along the coast. I really love that it calms me.

Several problems: 'the same' is unclear; use 'the sea'. 'Gave me' should be present 'gives me' to match general preference (present tense). 'A sense of peaceful' is incorrect adjective; use noun 'a sense of peace'. 'Walking alongside the sea' is grammatically possible but 'along the coast' is more natural. 'Especially the coastal' is incomplete; 'coastal' needs a noun. 'It gives me the calm, make me calm' is ungrammatical; use 'it calms me' or 'it gives me calm'. Suggestions: use present tense for habitual feelings, use 'peace' not 'peaceful', and simplify to 'it calms me'.