Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. "travel free person", "public car by my private car"). Use correct word forms and simple prepositions (e.g. "from" or "out of").

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by car. For example, when I drive my own car I enjoy watching towns and countryside along the road, because seeing different places helps me notice interesting details and plan stops. Also, when I ride a bus I like to observe street life and scenery to get a sense of the area.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a concise reason and one specific example. Use correct vocabulary ("take photos", not "screenshots" for scenery) and grammar (consistent tense, no repeated words). Use a linking word like "because" to connect the reason. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings or landscapes when I travel. For example, if I spot an old church or a striking modern building I will photograph it because I want to remember the place and share it with friends later.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then support it with one or two specific reasons and an example. Use correct pronouns and verb forms ("I feel calm and relaxed" not "feel themselves"). Vary vocabulary (e.g. peaceful, tranquil) and use a linking word like "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer the mountains to the sea because they make me feel calm and peaceful. For instance, when I hike in the hills I enjoy quiet trails and wide views, which help me relax after a busy week. Because of that peaceful atmosphere I usually choose mountains for a weekend getaway.

× Well to be honest I am a travel free person so that's why I explore different kinds of places while I'm travelling.

✓ Well, to be honest, I am a person who likes to travel freely, so I explore different kinds of places while I'm traveling.

Original sentence has awkward word order and a nonstandard phrase 'travel free person'. This is a sentence structure issue: reorder elements and use natural phrases. Use commas after introductory phrase 'Well, to be honest,' and replace 'travel free person' with 'a person who likes to travel freely' for clarity.

× And mostly I want prefer to travel by my public car by my private car.

✓ Mostly I prefer to travel by my private car rather than by public transport.

The original mixes 'want prefer' and uses 'my public car' which is incorrect. This is an article and word-choice problem: use 'prefer' (no 'want') and 'private car' vs 'public transport'. Use 'rather than' to show contrast.

× So that's why I look outside and see Sreenik view upside.

✓ So that's why I look outside and see scenic views outside.

'See Sreenik view upside' has incorrect spelling and preposition use. This is a preposition and word-choice issue: use 'scenic views' and 'outside' or 'out the window'. Avoid 'upside' in this context.

× If I see something interesting building or saw some type of places or historical building, then I definitely take a screenshot, snapshot of that building because to to Remember Me.

✓ If I see an interesting building or a historical site, I definitely take a photo to remember it.

Sentence mixes tenses ('see' and 'saw') and uses redundant words. The error falls under improper verb forms/past participle mixing and sentence structure. Keep present simple 'see' for habitual action, use 'take a photo' (not 'screenshot' for scenery) and 'to remember it'.

× I love to see mountains because, uh, I think they give me calm, relaxed and comfortable view.

✓ I love to see mountains because I think they give me a calm, relaxing, and comfortable view.

Use adjectives/adverb forms correctly: 'relaxing' (present participle) modifies 'view'. This is a present tense/word form issue. Also add articles: 'a calm, relaxing, and comfortable view.'

× When I saw mountains, I feel themselves in a very quiet and comfortable manner.

✓ When I see mountains, I feel peaceful and comfortable.

Original mixes past 'saw' with present 'feel' and uses wrong reflexive pronoun 'themselves'. This is a pronoun and tense error. Use consistent present tense for habitual actions and appropriate subject-linked pronoun (no reflexive needed).

× I feel myself in a silent view.

✓ I feel surrounded by silence.

'Feel myself in a silent view' is unnatural and misuses adjective 'silent' with 'view'. This is an adjective/adverb usage issue. Use natural expressions like 'feel peaceful' or 'feel surrounded by silence.'

× So that's why I prefer mountains rather than sea.

✓ So that's why I prefer the mountains to the sea.

Use correct comparative structure: 'prefer A to B' or 'prefer A rather than B' but include articles: 'the mountains' and 'the sea'. This is a comparative/preference expression error.