Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep the answer direct and concise, begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Avoid slight redundancy (e.g., "car or other transport" can be simplified) and watch minor grammar (use "on other transport" or list examples). Use one linking word when moving to the detail (e.g., "because," "for example").

Example: Yes — I usually look out of the window when I travel by car because natural scenery helps me relax. For example, I especially enjoy watching trees and birds along the road, which makes the trip feel more pleasant.

Suggestion: Start with a clear, natural topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I often take photos..."). Avoid awkward phrases like "definitely not a doubt" and unclear terms such as "my 1 devices." Keep to two to three sentences and use a linking word to explain why. Be specific about what you photograph and when.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of scenery outside the car window. For instance, I like to photograph small details such as sunlight on leaves or distant hills because these images help me relax when I look back at them later.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and organize the answer into a clear topic sentence plus two concise contrasting details using linking phrases (e.g., "on the other hand"). Correct grammar and sentence structure (subject-verb agreement, complete clauses). Be specific about activities and feelings to support your preference.

Example: I like both for different reasons. For example, mountains make me feel connected to nature and I enjoy hiking in forests; on the other hand, the sea helps me feel calm and relaxed when I walk along the shore.

× Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by car or other transport because natural scenery helps me relax and lifts my spirits.

✓ Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by car or by other transport because natural scenery helps me relax and lifts my spirits.

No present participle error here; change is minor: include preposition 'by' before 'other transport' for parallel structure and natural usage. Suggestion: use parallel prepositions when listing modes of transport. (This suggestion meets rule 11 but primary issue is preposition use.)

× Definitely not a doubt. I love to click pictures of natural scenery outside the car window because I want to capture those little things in my 1 devices so that it helps me rejuvenate my mind and uplift my spirit.

✓ Definitely no doubt. I love to take pictures of natural scenery outside the car window because I want to capture those little things on my devices so that they help rejuvenate my mind and uplift my spirits.

Multiple issues: 'Definitely not a doubt' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'Definitely no doubt' or 'There is no doubt'. 'Click pictures' is informal; 'take pictures' is standard. 'in my 1 devices' seems to be a typo; correct preposition is 'on my devices'. 'it helps me' should agree with plural 'they' or refer to 'the pictures' so 'they help rejuvenate my mind and uplift my spirits'. Use plural 'spirits' commonly and keep pronoun agreement. Suggestions: use standard collocations ('take pictures', 'on my devices') and ensure pronoun agreement.

× I prefer both the mountains and sea for different reasons. I prefer both mountains and sea for different reasons.

✓ I prefer both the mountains and the sea for different reasons.

Sentence is repeated and lacks articles in the second instance. Use definite article 'the' with 'mountains' and 'sea' when speaking about those environments generally. Remove repetition. Suggestion: avoid duplicate sentences and use articles for general natural features: 'the mountains' and 'the sea'.

× Mountains makes me feel more connected to the wildlife and motivate me to protect forest, especially when I go for hiking and the sea.

✓ The mountains make me feel more connected to wildlife and motivate me to protect forests, especially when I go hiking.

'Mountains' is plural so the verb must be 'make' not 'makes' (subject-verb agreement). 'the wildlife' can be 'wildlife' without 'the'. 'motivate me' should remain plural subject. 'protect forest' needs plural or article: 'protect forests' or 'protect the forest'. 'go for hiking' is incorrect collocation; use 'go hiking'. Also the original ends awkwardly referencing 'and the sea'; that fragment was moved to separate sentence. Suggestion: match verb number to subject, use correct collocations ('go hiking'), and use articles or plural nouns appropriately.

× The scenery up close the sea on the other hand. Make me feel calm and relaxed walking on the road.

✓ The scenery up close to the sea, on the other hand, makes me feel calm and relaxed when I walk along the shore.

Original has sentence fragments and missing preposition: 'The scenery up close the sea' lacks 'to' and is an incomplete clause. 'Make me feel' should be 'makes' to agree with singular 'scenery' (subject-verb agreement). 'walking on the road' is unnatural for seaside; 'when I walk along the shore' is clearer. Combined into one sentence with commas and correct verb form. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments, include necessary prepositions, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose appropriate collocations for place descriptions.