Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (use "prefer listening to music", "it helps me relax", avoid redundant phrases). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Not really — I prefer listening to music when I travel by car or bus because it helps me relax and feel more comfortable. Also, music prevents me from feeling dizzy on long journeys.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and add one specific example. Use correct verb tense and article usage (e.g., "I take photos", "I take a photo of the sky or animals"). Use a linking phrase like "for example" to introduce examples and avoid vague words like "the others animal."

Example: Yes, I often take photos from the car window when I see something beautiful. For example, I usually photograph colourful skies or interesting animals I spot while driving.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give specific reasons with natural expressions. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "also") and avoid repetition (don't repeat "sea"). Correct sentence structure (e.g., "I prefer the sea because I enjoy the sound of the waves"). Finish your thought — don't leave a sentence incomplete.

Example: I prefer the sea because I enjoy the sound of the waves and the relaxed atmosphere. I also like walking along the shore and watching seabirds, which helps me unwind.

× No, I more prefer listening music in car or bus because it can make more feel relax and feel more comfortable in the car and it will not let me become dizzy.

✓ No, I prefer listening to music in the car or bus because it makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable and prevents me from becoming dizzy.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' after 'listening' (verb + -ing requires object introduced by to), unnecessary word 'more' before 'prefer' (prefer is a comparative verb and does not need 'more'), 'in car or bus' needs articles 'the car or bus', incorrect verb form 'can make more feel relax' should be 'makes me feel more relaxed' (subject-verb agreement and adjective vs adverb issues), 'it will not let me become dizzy' is unnatural; use 'prevents me from becoming dizzy' (correct verb + -ing/past participle). Suggestion: use 'prefer' without 'more', add 'to' after 'listening', include articles, match subject and verb, and use appropriate adjective/adverb forms.

× Yes, when I saw the beautiful scenery I was take the photo in the car window such as the beautiful sky and the others animal.

✓ Yes, when I saw the beautiful scenery I took photos through the car window, such as of the beautiful sky and other animals.

Errors: incorrect progressive 'was take' should be simple past 'took' to match 'saw' (past tense). 'Take the photo in the car window' is awkward; use 'took photos through the car window'. 'The others animal' is incorrect plural and article usage; use 'other animals'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense, correct verb form, pluralize 'animal' and remove unnecessary articles, and use preposition 'through' or 'from' for windows.

× Yes, when I saw the beautiful scenery I was take the photo in the car window such as the beautiful sky and the others animal.

✓ Yes, when I saw the beautiful scenery I took photos through the car window, such as of the beautiful sky and other animals.

Errors: 'the others animal' mixes singular/plural and incorrect determiner. 'Photos' (plural) fits better when referring to multiple scenes. Suggestion: use plural 'photos' and plural noun 'animals' with correct determiner 'other'.

× Yes, when I saw the beautiful scenery I was take the photo in the car window such as the beautiful sky and the others animal.

✓ Yes, when I saw the beautiful scenery I took photos through the car window, such as of the beautiful sky and other animals.

Errors: 'in the car window' is incorrect; use 'through the car window' or 'from the car window'. Also 'such as the beautiful sky' needs 'of' to indicate what the photos were of. Suggestion: use correct prepositions 'through/from' and 'of' to describe subjects of photos.

× I more prefer the sea because I like the sea for the wave of the sea and listen to the sound that the sea. And I also like to.

✓ I prefer the sea because I like the waves and the sound of the sea. I do too.

Errors: 'I more prefer' incorrect use of 'more' with 'prefer' (redundant). 'The wave of the sea' should be plural 'the waves' or simply 'waves'. 'Listen to the sound that the sea' is ungrammatical; use 'the sound of the sea'. 'And I also like to' is incomplete; use 'I do too' to agree. Suggestion: remove 'more', use plural nouns where appropriate, use 'of' for possession, and complete the agreement sentence.

× No, I more prefer listening music in car or bus because it can make more feel relax and feel more comfortable in the car and it will not let me become dizzy.

✓ No, I prefer listening to music in the car or bus because it makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable and prevents me from becoming dizzy.

Errors: 'it can make more feel relax' uses 'make' with adjective incorrectly and 'more' is wrong; should be 'it makes me feel more relaxed' — subject-verb agreement requires 'makes' for singular 'it'. Also 'feel more comfortable' needs correct verb form and pronoun 'me'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject (makes), use object pronoun 'me', and use adjective 'relaxed' after 'feel'.