Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar: begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and article usage (e.g., “look out of the window,” “the transport does not always allow us to stop”). Avoid redundancy like “beautiful moment I am watching live.”

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. Because the vehicle cannot stop everywhere, I enjoy watching the passing scenery and sometimes take mental notes of interesting views, such as colorful markets or fields, to remember the trip.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and vocabulary accuracy: use correct tense and verb forms (e.g., “I take photos,” not “I do took”), and choose suitable adjectives (e.g., “cheerful” is okay but “affiliate” is incorrect). Keep answer to one topic sentence plus a specific reason and an example. Use a linking word like “so” or “because” properly.

Example: Yes, I often take photos through the car window because we cannot stop to get better shots. For example, I photograph bright landscapes or interesting buildings as we pass, then I select the best images later when we stop.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, then give two concise, specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “heavy landfall” — use precise expressions such as “landslides” or “steep terrain.” Keep under five sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., “coast,” “beach,” “mountainous areas”).

Example: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy swimming and relaxing on the beach. Also, I find mountainous hikes physically demanding and sometimes risky due to steep trails or possible landslides, so coastal trips suit me better.

× Yes, I often lookout the window whenever I am traveling by a bus or a car because the transportation always not allow us to stop everywhere.

✓ Yes, I often look out the window whenever I am traveling by a bus or a car because the transportation does not always allow us to stop everywhere.

The original sentence has several issues: 'lookout' is a noun/compound, but the verb phrase should be 'look out' (two words). The phrase 'always not allow' is incorrect negative word order; use 'does not always allow' for present simple negative with 'transportation' (singular non-count noun) and to express frequency. Also use 'does' for third-person singular present. Suggestion: separate 'look out' into verb + particle and use 'does not always allow'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× So I usually view the beautiful scenery through my window and it allows me to capture every beautiful moment I am watching live.

✓ So I usually view the beautiful scenery through my window and it allows me to capture every beautiful moment I see live.

The phrase 'I am watching live' is awkward here; 'see' is a simple present verb that fits habitual action. Using present continuous 'am watching' with 'live' is unnecessary. Replace with 'I see live' or better 'I see' to match habitual context. Also 'view' and 'see' are synonyms; keep structure consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× Yes, as I mentioned earlier that while travelling through different transportation it doesn't allows us to stop everywhere.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned earlier, while travelling by different means of transportation, it doesn't allow us to stop everywhere.

Use 'travel by' or 'by different means of transportation' rather than 'through different transportation.' 'Doesn't allows' mixes negative contraction with wrong verb form; after 'doesn't' use base verb 'allow'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'it doesn't allow us' or 'we can't stop everywhere.' Grammar problem type ID: 4

× So I do took photos of the scenery outside from my window because the view is quite cheerful and affiliate and it is very much fabulous.

✓ So I take photos of the scenery outside from my window because the view is quite cheerful and appealing and it is very beautiful.

'Do took' incorrectly mixes auxiliary 'do' with past tense 'took'. For habitual action use present simple 'take photos.' Also 'affiliate' is incorrect word choice; likely 'appealing' or 'attractive.' 'Very much fabulous' is unnatural; use 'very beautiful' or 'truly fabulous.' Suggestion: use present tense for habitual actions and choose correct adjectives. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I usually prefer going on beaches rather than mountains because mountains allows you to do hiking and it can have heavy landfall as well.

✓ I usually prefer going to beaches rather than mountains because mountains allow you to go hiking and they can have heavy rainfall as well.

Subject-verb agreement: 'mountains allows' should be 'mountains allow' (plural subject). Use 'going to beaches' not 'going on beaches.' 'Do hiking' is ungrammatical; say 'go hiking.' 'Heavy landfall' is incorrect; likely 'heavy rainfall.' Also ensure pronouns agree: 'they can have.' Grammar problem type ID: 2

× I consider them quite dangerous, whereas on sea I feel quite comfortable and I am aware of the boundaries.

✓ I consider them quite dangerous, whereas at sea I feel quite comfortable and I am aware of the boundaries.

Use the correct preposition 'at sea' rather than 'on sea.' Also 'them' refers to mountains, which is fine, but preposition error affects meaning. Suggestion: use fixed expressions: 'at sea' and 'on the beach.' Grammar problem type ID: 11

× And I do love swimming as well.

✓ And I really love swimming as well.

'Do love' is emphatic but informal; 'really love' sounds more natural in this context. The sentence is grammatically acceptable but improvement in adverb choice gives natural emphasis. Suggestion: use 'really' or keep 'do love' only if stressing contrast. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× So I prefer going on sea rather than mountain.

✓ So I prefer going to the sea rather than the mountains.

Use articles and correct number: 'the sea' (singular) and 'the mountains' (plural). Also use 'going to' not 'going on.' Ensure parallel structure: 'the sea rather than the mountains.' Grammar problem type ID: 1