Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 答案总体自然且内容相关，但有几处可改进：1) 句子较长且有冗余（如“make sure videos”表达错误，应为“make short videos”或“record videos”）；2) 逻辑衔接词可更多使用以增强连贯性；3) 可用更具体细节（如具体城市、景观风格或拍摄角度）来丰富内容；4) 控制句子数量，避免超过5句。建议练习将长句拆成2–3句，并用恰当短语替换不准确表达。

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I find the changing views relaxing, so I usually take photos or record short videos of city skylines or rural fields. For example, on a recent trip to the countryside I filmed a row of golden rice fields at sunset, which helped me feel calm during the journey.

Suggestion: 回答简洁且内容具体，但有小问题：1) 有一处语法顺序小错误（“Not only I photograph”应为“Not only do I photograph”或更自然的“I not only take photos but also make short videos”）；2) 可加入连词如“so”或“and then”更自然；3) 可提供更具体的例子或感受以增加说服力。建议练习正确使用倒装结构和连接词，并保持句子在2–3句内。

Example: Yes, I often take photos and record short videos through the car window. I usually capture sunsets or striking skylines, and afterwards I review and share the best shots on social media so I can remember the trip better.

Suggestion: 答案表达清楚但存在以下问题：1) 有语法/用词错误（“I kept in the forest”不自然，应该是“I stayed in the forest”或“I was in the forest”）；2) 部分句子可更精简，避免重复（如“provides clean air and helps me get closer to nature”可合并）；3) 举例细节不够具体（可说明地点、时间或当时的感受）；4) 注意句子数量控制和衔接词使用。建议修改不自然表达，增加具体细节并用一到两句补充感受。

Example: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and camping in forests, which offer fresh air and a chance to reconnect with nature. For example, when I stayed in a mountain campsite last summer, I spotted and photographed a deer at dawn — that peaceful moment was unforgettable.

× I always take photos or make sure videos of the beautiful scenery outside the window such as the cityscape or the rural landscape, which helps me feel relaxed and prevents me from getting scar sickness.

✓ I always take photos or make short videos of the beautiful scenery outside the window, such as the cityscape or the rural landscape, which helps me feel relaxed and prevents me from getting carsick.

原句中 “make sure videos” 用法不正确，应为“make short videos”或“make sure”后接从句；另外 “scar sickness” 拼写与用词错误，正确为“carsick”（晕车）。建议：使用常见搭配 “take photos” 与 “make short videos”；注意拼写并使用正确的词。

× Not only I photograph, but I also make short videos.

✓ Not only do I take photographs, but I also make short videos.

原句中“Not only I photograph”缺少助动词，Not only... but... 的句型在主语与动词之间需倒装或使用适当助动词。建议：使用“Not only do I ... but I also ...”或改为“Not only do I take photographs; I also make short videos.”

× After the trip, I look back at these photos and videos and then share them on the social platform to better remember my traveling experience.

✓ After the trip, I look back at these photos and videos and then share them on social platforms to better remember my travel experiences.

原句中“the social platform”使用不自然且有冠词问题，plural 更符合常用表达；“traveling experience”在此语境用复数或改为单数“travel experience”更自然。建议：使用复数“social platforms”或直接“social media”；“travel experiences”或“travel experience”。

× For instance, once I kept in the forest, I spotted and photographed an adorable deer.

✓ For instance, once I was staying in the forest, I spotted and photographed an adorable deer.

原句中“kept in the forest”用法错误。“keep” 的过去式/过去分词不用于表示“停留、住在”；应使用“was staying”或“stayed”。建议：根据要表达的持续性选择“was staying”或简单过去“stayed”。