Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, súc tích hơn và tránh lặp từ. Nên có câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó thêm 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ phù hợp (ví dụ: because, so). Lưu ý phát âm và trật tự từ (ví dụ: "when I travel by car"). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu để tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by car because I usually have nothing else to do. I find it interesting to watch passing landscapes, so it helps me pass the time and relax.

Suggestion: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh nói lắp. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, so) và diễn đạt mục đích một cách gọn: why you take photos and what you do with them. Sử dụng cụm từ phù hợp như "take photos from the car window" hoặc "capture scenes".

Example: Yes, I usually take photos or short videos from the car window because I want to capture interesting views. For example, if I see a beautiful sunset I will save it and sometimes post it on my social media.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và lựa chọn từ (ví dụ: "hostel" sai nghĩa ở đây, dùng "hustle" hoặc "hustle and bustle"). Nên dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể về lý do và một ví dụ cá nhân để tăng tính thuyết phục.

Example: I prefer the sea because it makes me feel calm and relaxed. When I walk along the coast or watch the waves, I can forget the hustle and bustle of city life, so it helps me to recharge.

× Yes, definitely. I frequently look at the window when I when I travel by car because I think that is because I am I don't have anything to do when I sit in the cars.

✓ Yes, definitely. I frequently look out of the window when I travel by car because I don't have anything to do when I sit in the car.

The sentence contains repeated and unnecessary words and incorrect preposition/number use. 'look at the window' is less natural than 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window'. Remove duplicated phrases 'when I' and 'that is because I am'. 'cars' should be singular 'car' to match the situation of a single trip. Suggestion: simplify sentences, avoid repetition, and use the preposition 'out of' or omit it for natural spoken English.

× It's very boring, but it's more much more interesting when you see outside the.

✓ It's very boring, but it's much more interesting when you look outside.

The original has incorrect word order ('more much more') and a dangling preposition phrase ending with 'the.' Use 'much more' (adverb + comparative) and 'look outside' to complete the verb phrase. Remove the extraneous 'the.'

× Yes, I usually take a photo outside of the car window or even take some videos because I want if I catch something interesting or beautiful I want to capture it and post this on my social media.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos through the car window or even record some videos because if I see something interesting or beautiful I want to capture it and post it on my social media.

Use plural 'photos' for general habit. 'Outside of the car window' is awkward; use 'through the car window.' 'Take some videos' is better as 'record some videos.' The conditional clause 'because I want if I catch...' is ungrammatical; use 'because if I see...' and avoid repeating 'I want' twice. Use 'post it' rather than 'post this' for natural reference.

× Well, I prefer the sea because I love the sea the most.

✓ Well, I prefer the sea because I love it the most.

Repeating 'the sea' is redundant. Use the pronoun 'it' to refer back to 'the sea.' This improves naturalness and avoids repetition.

× Whenever I see I look at the sea or walk on the coast, I feel very calm and relaxed.

✓ Whenever I look at the sea or walk along the coast, I feel very calm and relaxed.

The phrase 'Whenever I see I look at the sea' is redundant; keep one verb 'look.' Use the preposition 'along' with 'walk' to indicate movement by the coastline rather than 'on the coast.'

× It helps me to escape from the hostel and bustle of the city life.

✓ It helps me escape from the hustle and bustle of city life.

The original has 'hostel' (wrong word) and redundant articles: say 'hustle and bustle' (fixed phrase) and 'city life' without 'the.' Also, 'helps me to escape' is acceptable, but 'helps me escape' is more natural. Replace incorrect noun 'hostel' with 'hustle.'