Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Говорите более естественно и прямо: начните с короткого утверждения, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных уточнения. Избегайте долгих пауз с 'uh' и неверных слов (например, 'scanner' вместо 'scenery'). Используйте связки (for example, because, and) чтобы предложение было логичным и компактным. Ограничьтесь максимум 3–4 предложениями.

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I usually commute for work and study, so I see a lot of countryside and mountain views. I enjoy watching the scenery because it relaxes me and I often notice small details like farmers working or seasonal flowers.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте ответ более грамотно и связно: сначала короткий положительный ответ, затем причина и пример. Избегайте прямого перевода с русского ('new version of phone', 'will meet our country's nature'). Уточняйте, какие именно фотографии вы делаете и как часто. Используйте подходящие связки (because, so, for example).

Example: Yes, I often take photos from the car window. I recently bought a better phone camera so I can capture clearer images, and I post them on social media because I want to share my country's landscapes with friends and followers. For example, I usually photograph mountain ranges and sunrise scenes.

Suggestion: Дайте краткий и понятный ответ: прямо назовите предпочтение, затем объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Уберите лишние вводные слова ('however', 'uh') и поправьте времена и формы ('I really like the sea', 'it relaxes my mind'). Используйте связки (because, so, for example) и не более 3–4 предложений.

Example: I prefer the sea because it's very relaxing for me. The sound of the waves and the open horizon help me unwind after a busy week. For example, when I sit on the beach I feel calmer and more focused afterward.

× Uh, because of my work and my study, I'm always traveling by bus, uh, and sometimes by car.

✓ Because of my work and my studies, I always travel by bus and sometimes by car.

The original uses present continuous 'I'm always traveling' where simple present 'I always travel' is more appropriate for habitual actions. Also 'study' should be plural 'studies' when referring to both work and studies. Suggest using simple present for routines and pluralize nouns referring to multiple activities.

× And I really like the scanner out of our windows because our country has a great nature and, uh, sceneries are exciting and enjoyable.

✓ And I really like the scenery outside the windows because our country has beautiful nature and the views are exciting and enjoyable.

Use 'scenery' (uncountable) instead of 'scanner' and 'outside the windows' rather than 'out of our windows'. 'Great nature' is unnatural; 'beautiful nature' or 'natural beauty' is better. 'Sceneries' is incorrect; use 'views' or 'the scenery'.

× Yes and especially for this I bought a new version of phone and I'm posting it on social medias also because I want the other people will also see this and will meet our country's nature.

✓ Yes, especially for this I bought a new phone and I post it on social media because I want other people to see it and experience our country's nature.

Use 'a new phone' not 'a new version of phone'. 'Social media' is uncountable and singular; not 'social medias'. Use present simple 'I post' for habitual action. Replace 'the other people will also see this and will meet' with 'other people to see it and experience', using 'to' infinitive after 'want' and 'experience' instead of 'meet'.

× However, uh, our country is, uh, surrounded by many mountains, uh, especially because of my, uh, inner nature.

✓ Our country is surrounded by many mountains. Personally, because of my inner nature,

Split into two sentences for clarity. 'Especially because of my inner nature' is awkward; 'Personally, because of my inner nature' clarifies the speaker's preference. Maintain present simple 'is surrounded' for a current state.

× I really liked the sea, uh, because it's so relaxing and my mind and soul, uh, just chilling out when I'm seeing this.

✓ I really like the sea because it's so relaxing and my mind and soul just chill when I see it.

Use present simple 'I really like' for a general preference, not past 'liked'. 'Chilling out' and 'when I'm seeing this' are informal and use progressive unnecessarily; use 'just chill' and 'when I see it'. Also replace 'this' with 'it' referring to the sea.