Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, combine short fragments, and add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct tense and article use (e.g., 'when I travel to my village I take the bus' not 'I go through bus').

Example: Yes — I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus to my village. As soon as we leave the city, I watch the scenery because there is a lot of greenery and mountains that I love, and I find it very relaxing.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct subject pronouns and simple linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'as much as video' — be specific about what you do and why. Keep within 2–4 sentences and correct grammar (e.g., 'I don't prefer' not 'They don't prefer').

Example: I don't usually take photos; I prefer to record videos of the scenery. Afterwards I edit the clips in landscape mode and post highlights on Instagram so I can share the view with friends.

Suggestion: Make a clear preference statement and give a reason or contrast using linking words. Correct small grammar points (use 'seas' or 'the sea' and 'beaches' consistently). Add a concise concluding sentence about future plans or feelings.

Example: I've always preferred mountains because I grew up visiting mountainous areas. However, I've never been to the sea, so I'm curious to experience beaches one day and enjoy the ocean views.

× Yes, I am a nature freak so most of the time when I visit my village I go through bus.

✓ Yes, I am a nature freak, so most of the time when I visit my village I go by bus.

Use of the preposition 'through' with 'bus' is incorrect. The correct preposition for modes of transport is 'by'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× I always start watching outside.

✓ I always start watching the scenery outside.

The verb 'watch' needs an object here to be clear. Adding 'the scenery' specifies what is being watched and completes the sentence structure.

× Whenever I leave the city and the village starts coming.

✓ Whenever I leave the city and the village begins to appear.

The clause 'the village starts coming' is unnatural in English. Use 'begins to appear' or 'comes into view' to express the idea that the village becomes visible. Also maintain verb phrase consistency.

× There is a lot of greenery, mountains that I love.

✓ There is a lot of greenery and mountains, which I love.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction and a relative pronoun. Use 'and' to link items and 'which' to add the comment 'I love' as a non-defining relative clause.

× They don't prefer to take photos, instead I try to videograph them and take as much as video that I can.

✓ I don't prefer to take photos; instead, I try to video them and take as much footage as I can.

The subject 'They' is incorrect; the speaker refers to themselves so use 'I'. 'Videograph' is uncommon in casual speech—'video' or 'record' is better. 'As much as video that I can' is ungrammatical; use 'as much footage as I can'.

× Then I edit it in landscape mode and post on Instagram.

✓ Then I edit it in landscape mode and post it on Instagram.

The verb 'post' needs a direct object here ('it') to refer back to the video. Also include the object to make the sentence complete.

× Since childhood I have always traveled to places where there are a lot of mountains.

✓ Since childhood I have always traveled to places with many mountains.

This is acceptable but can be improved: 'where there are a lot of mountains' is wordy; 'with many mountains' is more natural. Tense 'have always traveled' matches 'since childhood' correctly.

× I have never visited any beaches or sea.

✓ I have never visited any beaches or the sea.

When referring to 'sea' in general, use the definite article 'the sea'. Also 'any beaches' is fine; adding 'the' before 'sea' makes it grammatical.

× So I'm very curious and I want to go to different sea and beaches and enjoy the view.

✓ So I'm very curious and I want to go to different seas and beaches and enjoy the view.

The noun 'sea' should be plural ('seas') to match 'different' and to parallel 'beaches'. Also consider 'different seas and beaches' or 'different beaches and seas' for parallel structure.