Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak more fluently and avoid fillers (uh, um). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers concise (no more than 4–5 sentences) and vary vocabulary (e.g., use "refreshing," "relaxing," "captivating").

Example: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the scenery very relaxing. For example, I enjoy watching tree-lined roads and changing landscapes, which helps me unwind after a busy day. As a result, I usually choose a window seat whenever possible.

Suggestion: Give a clear, grammatically correct response and include a brief specific example. Remove filler words and fix tense and vocabulary (e.g., "DSLR camera," "take photos"). Use a linking phrase to connect ideas (e.g., "for example," "often").

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car. I usually bring my DSLR camera and, for example, I photographed coastal cliffs and rice terraces last summer, which I later shared with friends.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear preference and give two specific reasons connected with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences; use correct comparisons ("prefer the sea to the mountains").

Example: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I love the sound of waves and the wide, open views. Also, the seaside is more relaxing for me, so I often go there to swim and watch sunsets.

× Yes, I do look out the window at the scenery when, uh, I am traveling by bus or car because, uh, nature attracts me more, uh, from my childhood.

✓ Yes, I look out of the window at the scenery when I travel by bus or car because nature has attracted me since my childhood.

Tense and preposition issues: 'do look' is unnecessary emphatic in this context, so use simple present 'look'. Use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window'—both acceptable; 'out of' clarifies. 'When I am traveling' is awkward with general habit; use simple present 'when I travel'. 'Attracts me more, from my childhood' is incorrect sequence and preposition; use present perfect 'has attracted me' with 'since my childhood' to indicate a continuing situation from the past to now. Also remove filler hesitation words for clarity.

× Yes, I do actually when I travel, I carry my personal camera, uh, DSL camera and I took picture of uh, many sceneries, which attracts me more and done.

✓ Yes, when I travel I carry my personal DSLR camera and I take pictures of many sceneries that attract me.

Verb tense and noun form problems: For habitual action use present simple 'take' not past 'took'. 'DSL camera' is incorrect term; correct is 'DSLR camera'. Use plural 'pictures' and plural or singular 'scenery'—'many sceneries' is nonstandard; 'many scenic views' or 'many sceneries' can be replaced with 'many scenic views'. Relative clause: use 'that attract me' to agree with plural 'views'. Remove 'done' and filler words. Overall this fixes tense (present habit) and corrects noun forms.

× I must prefer the sea than mountains because the natural views of seas amazing most probably which is known as the.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because the natural views of the sea are more beautiful, in my opinion.

Incorrect modal and comparison structure: 'must prefer the sea than mountains' is wrong. Use simple preference 'I prefer the sea to the mountains'. Use comparative structure 'more beautiful' or 'more amazing' with 'than' or 'to'; here 'to' after 'prefer' is correct. 'Views of seas amazing' lacks verb and article agreement; use 'the natural views of the sea are more beautiful'. Remove 'most probably which is known as the' as it is incomplete and unclear. Provide clearer phrase 'in my opinion' if speaker wants to soften certainty.