Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更自然、句子數量控制在最多五句，注意時態與語法（例如：makes → make；more happier → happier），並加一個主題句與一兩個具體細節來支持。可以使用連接詞如 because 或 so 來使表達更連貫。

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing scenery. For example, seeing parks and city streets makes me feel relaxed and improves my mood.

Suggestion: 回答應更精簡且語法正確（makes → make；when I back to home → when I get back home）。給出具體例子或情境會更有說服力，並用連接詞如 so 或 and 來串聯原因與結果。

Example: Yes, I do. I often take photos of interesting views through the window so I can remember them later. For example, I once photographed a colorful sunset and looked at it when I got home to relax.

Suggestion: 要保持句子自然且語法正確（maybe can feel → can feel; I never think anything → I don’t think about anything）。先給出直接答案作為主題句，然後用一兩個具體理由或例子支持，並使用連接詞如 because 或 so。

Example: I prefer the sea because walking along the shore helps me relax and clear my mind. For instance, listening to the waves and feeling the breeze usually makes me forget about work and feel refreshed.

× Yes I always I like watching beautiful views and it can makes me more happier and let me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I always like watching beautiful views; it makes me happier and helps me feel relaxed.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式 / 第三人称单数 主谓一致。 解释（简体中文）：句中“I always I like watching”有重复的主语“I”；动名词“watching”用法正确，但“it can makes me”中“makes”是第三人称单数形式，前面已有情态动词can，情态动词后应接动词原形“make”，且一般不与“can”同时用“makes”。此外“more happier”为比较级重复（happier 已为比较级，不应加 more）。建议去掉重复主语、把“can makes”改为“makes”或“can make”，并将“more happier”改为“happier”。 改进建议：去掉多余的“I”，使用“It makes me happier”或“It can make me happier”。加标点使句子更清晰。

× Yes I do, I take photos of the scene near outside the car window because I think it can makes me feel comfortable and also I can see the view when I back to home.

✓ Yes, I do. I take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I think it makes me feel comfortable and I can look at the view when I get back home.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式 / 第三人称单数 / 介词使用 / 时态。 解释（简体中文）：原句“scene near outside the car window”短语冗余且介词使用不当，常说“scenery outside the car window”。“it can makes me”同样情态动词与动词形式不匹配，应该用“it makes me”或“it can make me”。“when I back to home”缺少助动词或正确短语，正确应为“when I get back home”或“when I return home”。 改进建议：使用“scenery outside the car window”，把“can makes”改为“makes”或“can make”，并用“get back home”或“return home”。注意句子间用句号或分号分开。

× I prefer the sea because when I walk along the sea I maybe can feel very relaxed and I never think anything when I was walking around.

✓ I prefer the sea because when I walk along the shore I can feel very relaxed, and I don't think about anything while I'm walking.

错误类型：时态 / 情态动词用法 / 介词和词汇选择。 解释（简体中文）：原句“I maybe can feel”中“maybe can”冗余且语序不自然，应改为“can”或“may”之一；“I never think anything when I was walking around”中时态混用（现在时的事实偏好与过去时的描述混用），且否定表达不自然，通常用“don't think about anything”。此外，“walk along the sea”更常用“walk along the shore”或“walk by the sea”。 改进建议：保持时态一致（描述习惯行为用现在时），使用“can feel”或“may feel”，把“never think anything”改为“don't think about anything”，并用“shore”或“by the sea”。