Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Melhore a fluência e a correção gramatical; reduza hesitações (como "uh") e erros como concordância e formas verbais. Comece com uma frase-tópico direta, então acrescente uma ou duas frases curtas de apoio usando conectores (por exemplo, "but", "so"). Corrija pequenas falhas: "I prefer to just close my eyes, put on my earphones and pretend that people and work don't exist." Mantenha o máximo de cinco frases e evite repetições.

Example: Honestly, if I'm in a good mood I like to look out the window and take photos of the scenery. But when I'm feeling down, I usually close my eyes and put on my earphones to block out everything.

Suggestion: Corrija problemas de gramática e repetições: use as formas corretas como "I prefer to listen to music" e evite duplicar palavras ("listen listen", "I'm I'm"). For mais coerência, dê uma frase-tópico curta e depois um detalhe. Use conectores simples como "instead" ou "so" para ligar ideias.

Example: Not really. I usually prefer to listen to music or read a book instead of taking photos, because I find those activities more relaxing during a journey.

Suggestion: Melhore a naturalidade e precisão gramatical: evite repetições ("peaceful, peaceful") e corrija concordância ("everything that I really adore" ou "all of that I really adore"). Comece com uma frase direta (I prefer the mountains.), depois adicione razões claras usando conectores como "because" e exemplos específicos (hiking, scenery).

Example: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and the quiet atmosphere. For example, I like hiking on trails and relaxing in peaceful spots where I can disconnect from the city.

× To be honest, if I am in a good mood I would uh, look outside the window, take pictures and everything.

✓ To be honest, if I am in a good mood I will look outside the window, take pictures and everything.

The student used 'would' in a real conditional about present/future habitual behavior. In first conditional or general present habits, use 'will' or simple present. Suggest: use 'will' for likely future actions or 'I look' for habitual actions. Avoid 'would' unless showing hypothetical or unreal situations.

× If I am in a bad mood, I prefer just close my eyes, put on my earphones and pretend that people and work doesn't exist.

✓ If I am in a bad mood, I prefer to just close my eyes, put on my earphones and pretend that people and work don't exist.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive with 'to' (prefer to close) or a gerund (prefer closing). Also subject-verb agreement: 'people and work' is a plural compound subject so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Suggest: use 'prefer to close' or 'prefer closing' and 'don't exist' for plural subjects.

× No, not really actually I prefer listen listen music or read a book or something like that.

✓ No, not really. Actually I prefer to listen to music or read a book or something like that.

The student omitted 'to' after 'prefer' and the preposition 'to' after 'listen' is required: 'listen to music'. Also repetition 'listen listen' is filler and should be removed. Suggest: 'prefer to listen to music' or 'I prefer listening to music'.

× I'm I'm not into take pictures.

✓ I'm not into taking pictures.

After the expression 'be into' the verb should be in the -ing form ('taking'). The student used the base form 'take', which is incorrect. Suggest: 'I'm not into taking pictures' or 'I don't like taking pictures'.

× I really like the fresh air, uh, this peaceful, peaceful place and the quietness.

✓ I really like the fresh air, this peaceful place and the quietness.

Repeating 'peaceful' is redundant; remove duplication. Also 'quietness' is correct but 'the peace and quiet' or 'the quiet' sounds more natural. Suggest: 'this peaceful place and the peace and quiet'.

× This is everything that I really adores.

✓ This is everything that I really adore.

When a relative clause has subject 'I', the verb should agree: 'I adore' (base form after modal/auxiliary). The student wrote 'adore s' which is third-person singular; incorrect for subject 'I'. Suggest: 'that I really adore'.