Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 答案需更直接且语法正确。避免无关或混乱的词（例如“online books”不合上下文）。需要一句主题句表明是否看风景，然后用1–2句具体细节支持，使用连词使句子连贯。注意动词时态与主谓一致，使用恰当形容词替代重复词。

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when travelling by bus or car. I find the changing scenery relaxing, especially trees and city skylines, because they help me rest my eyes after long screen time. For example, I often enjoy watching parks and rivers glide by, which makes the journey more pleasant.

Suggestion: 回答清晰且直接，但可以更简洁并补充具体细节。注意用词自然（例如用“drive”或“I'm usually the driver”），并加入连词连接两句话。可说明一次具体场景以增加内容丰富度。

Example: No, I don't usually take photos because I'm often the driver and need to focus on the road. However, I pay close attention to the scenery; for instance, I like watching the countryside views when driving home on weekends.

Suggestion: 回答表达了偏好但部分词汇和表达不自然（如“climb on the boxes”不明确，“a few pleasure”错误）。建议先给出简短主题句，接着用两点具体理由，用正确词汇如“climb mountains”或“hiking”，并用连词连贯句子。可举例说明一次登山经历。

Example: I prefer the mountains because I'm not a confident swimmer and I feel uncomfortable in the sea. Also, hiking in the mountains gives me a sense of achievement; for example, I once climbed a local hill and enjoyed the quiet views from the summit.

× Yes, online books through windows.

✓ Yes, I look out of the window.

原句结构不完整且词序与用词错误。“online books through windows”没有意义，应该明确主语和动词，使用动词短语“look out of the window”来表达“朝窗外看”。建议构成完整句子：主语(I) + 谓语(look out of) + 宾语(the window)。

× I like the scenery I see.

✓ I like the scenery I see outside.

原句可理解但信息不完整。需明确地点状语“outside”以对应问题“when travelling by bus or car”。此外可以保持原人称代词I，但建议加地点补充使句子更自然。

× I think they are see magnificent and beautiful and it can ease my eyes so I love the scenery I do call.

✓ I think they are magnificent and beautiful, and they relax my eyes, so I really like the scenery.

原句存在多处问题：使用了错误的动词“see”与“They are see magnificent”，代词指代混乱（they 指 scenery 更合适用复数代词并与后文保持一致），还有“it can ease my eyes”中主语单复数不一致。改为“They are magnificent and beautiful, and they relax my eyes”使主谓一致且语义清晰；末尾表达“我很喜欢这风景”用“I really like the scenery”。

× No, because I often become the driver of the car so I can't have any time to take photos of the scenery.

✓ No, because I am often the driver, so I don't have time to take photos of the scenery.

原句中“become the driver”用法不当，表示“成为司机”不如直接用“am the driver”；“can't have any time”是错误搭配，应使用“don't have time”。时态和情态动词也需符合习惯用法。建议用简单现在时描述习惯性动作："I am often the driver" 和"I don't have time"。

× But I always watch the scenery around me.

✓ But I always watch the scenery around me.

该句本身语法正确，使用一般现在时描述习惯性动作恰当。这里只是重复确认，无需修改。

× I prefer the mountains.

✓ I prefer the mountains.

句子语法正确，无需修改。保留原句。

× Firstly, I'm not good at swimming so I can't go into the sea.

✓ Firstly, I'm not good at swimming, so I can't go into the sea.

句子基本正确，但在书写上需在从句与主句之间加逗号，使句子更符合书面英语规范。时态和情态动词使用正确。

× Moreover, when I climb on the boxes I feel, uh, quite a few pleasure and a bit success.

✓ Moreover, when I climb mountains I feel quite a lot of pleasure and a bit of success.

原句多处不当："climb on the boxes"显然用词不当，应为"climb mountains"或"climb"后接具体名词；"quite a few pleasure"不正确，'a few'用于可数名词，'pleasure'是不可数，应使用"quite a lot of pleasure"或"much pleasure"；"a bit success"缺少介词或量词，应为"a bit of success"。因此改为"climb mountains...feel quite a lot of pleasure and a bit of success"。