Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần rút gọn và mạch lạc hơn, chỉnh ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ thích hợp. Tránh lặp từ như “look out” nhiều lần; thay vào đó đưa câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó bổ sung 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh bạn thích, cảm xúc). Sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác như “it helps me relax” thay vì “it can help me reduce headache”.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when travelling by bus because watching the passing countryside helps me relax. For example, I enjoy seeing green fields and small villages, which distracts me from stress and eases my headaches.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng ngữ pháp và cấu trúc lộn xộn; cần sửa lỗi, nối ý hợp lý và cụ thể hóa sở thích. Tránh lỗi như “if it is my hobbies” và câu bị ngắt quãng “because.” Nên có câu chủ đề ngắn, giải thích lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể (khi nào bạn chụp, loại cảnh bạn thích).

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car, especially when I travel for leisure. For instance, I like to photograph dramatic sunsets or quaint village streets so I can look back at those memories later.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời ngắn và chứa nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không chính xác. Cần sử dụng cấu trúc so sánh đúng: “prefer X to Y”. Cũng nên mở rộng ý với 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: động vật, không khí trong lành, hoạt động bạn làm ở núi). Tránh những mô tả mơ hồ như “cute” và sửa “the atmosphere is clearly” thành “the atmosphere is clearer” hoặc “more peaceful”.

Example: I prefer the mountains to the sea because they have more wildlife and fresher air. For example, I enjoy hiking and spotting birds, and the peaceful atmosphere helps me unwind.

× Yes, I usually look out the window at the landscape when traveling by bus because when I look out I can feel relaxed and it can help me reduce headache.

✓ Yes, I usually look out the window at the landscape when traveling by bus because when I look out I feel relaxed and it helps reduce my headache.

The original sentence mixes modal/capability wording 'can feel' and 'can help' with a habitual present context introduced by 'usually'. For habitual actions in present tense, simple present is preferred: 'I feel' and 'it helps'. Also 'reduce headache' is ungrammatical; use 'reduce my headache' or 'relieve my headache'. Suggestion: use consistent simple present for habitual routines and include a possessive before 'headache'.

× Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery outside, especially if it is my hobbies when I travel because. It can help me remember moments.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery outside, especially because it is one of my hobbies when I travel. It helps me remember moments.

The phrase 'it is my hobbies' is incorrect because 'hobby' is singular and the structure is wrong. Use 'one of my hobbies' or 'a hobby of mine'. Also the sentence fragment 'because.' is incorrect; move 'because' to explain the reason or use 'especially because' as above. Change 'It can help' to 'It helps' for habitual present. Suggestion: use correct singular/plural noun form and complete the explanatory clause.

× I prefer the mountains than the sea because they are have many species, cute and the atmosphere is clearly.

✓ I prefer the mountains to the sea because they have many species, are cute, and the atmosphere is clear.

Use 'prefer X to Y' not 'prefer X than Y'. 'They are have' is ungrammatical; choose either 'they have' for possession or 'they are' for description. 'Cute' should describe 'species' or scenery with a clearer adjective; keep as 'are cute' if intended. 'The atmosphere is clearly' misuses the adverb 'clearly' where the adjective 'clear' is needed. Suggestion: use correct comparative construction 'prefer ... to ...', correct subject-verb forms, and proper adjective/adverb choice.