Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng câu khá lủng củng, có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Hãy dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, theo sau bởi một hoặc hai câu giải thích cụ thể; sửa động từ và giới từ (ví dụ: “when I travel” chứ không phải “in at that time”). Dùng từ nối nếu cần để làm rõ ý (e.g., “because”, “so”).

Example: I usually look out of the window when I travel by car because I like thinking about the places I will visit. For example, I often plan activities in my head and imagine what I will do when I arrive.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng bị ngập ngừng, phát âm và ngữ pháp sai (’sceneries’ không cần thiết; ‘I take photos’ đúng hơn). Tránh tiếng ngập ngừng, rút gọn ý và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về kiểu ảnh hoặc thời điểm bạn chụp. Chú ý sử dụng thì và số đúng (I take photos, not I takes).

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the view from the car window to remember special trips. For instance, I usually photograph sunsets or interesting buildings while passing through a city.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời ngắn và thiếu mạch lạc; nhiều ngập ngừng và sai từ vựng (’blade’ không đúng, cấu trúc bị đứt quãng). Hãy bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng (e.g., “I prefer both”), rồi so sánh ngắn gọn bằng câu nối, mô tả cụ thể trải nghiệm ở mỗi nơi. Tránh lặp và dùng từ chính xác như “landscape”, “fresh air”, “relaxing”.

Example: I like both the mountains and the sea for different reasons. The mountains are great for hiking and enjoying peaceful landscapes, while the sea is perfect for relaxing on the beach and listening to the waves.

× Actually, I usually see outside when I travel by car because in at that time I usually think about the destination.

✓ Actually, I usually look outside when I travel by car because at that time I usually think about the destination.

The verb 'see' is not the best collocation here; 'look' or 'look out' is used for intentionally directing attention. Also the phrase 'in at that time' is incorrect; use 'at that time'. Use present simple 'usually' + base verb for habitual actions.

× I will come and think about activities I will do in there.

✓ I think about the activities I will do there.

The original mixes tenses and uses unnecessary 'will' for a habitual or immediate thought. 'I will come and think' is unnatural. Use present simple 'I think' for current habit and keep 'will' only for the future action to be performed: 'activities I will do there'. Also remove the unnecessary preposition 'in' before 'there'.

× Actually, I love capturing beautiful sceneries to uh, remember special moments and places I whenever I trailed, uh, especially in the car, I usually takes photo, uh, scenery, umm, through a glass to uh, store many.

✓ Actually, I love capturing beautiful scenery to remember special moments and places. Whenever I travel, especially in the car, I usually take photos of the scenery through the glass to keep them.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun, not 'sceneries'. 'Take photos' is the correct plural, and the verb should be 'take' (not 'takes') to match the subject 'I'. 'Trailed' is incorrect; correct verb is 'travel'. Reorganised sentence for clarity and correct use of articles and infinitive 'to remember'.

× For example, mountains, umm, I like experience umm, this tree and uh, standing high to uh, see around the city, the uh, field and the sea I can.

✓ For example, for mountains, I like experiencing the trees and standing on high ground to see the city, the fields, and the sea.

The original has multiple issues: wrong form 'I like experience' should be 'I like experiencing' (verb + -ing), 'this tree' should be plural 'the trees' or 'trees' depending on intent, and 'standing high' is unclear so 'standing on high ground' is better. Also word order and missing articles were fixed. Use gerund after 'like' for activities.