Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và ngắn gọn theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “sightseeing when I have to travel by bus or car is...” nên chỉnh thành mệnh đề rõ ràng). Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để nối ý và nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: vì nó giúp bạn thư giãn hoặc vì bạn thích cảnh tự nhiên).

Example: Yes, I do. I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the changing landscapes help me relax and make the journey more enjoyable. For example, I like watching the countryside and small villages pass by, which feels peaceful.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác (“takes rent” là lỗi; có lẽ muốn nói “take photos” hoặc “snap shots”). Tránh lặp “I really enjoy” nhiều lần. Nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do và tần suất, dùng liên từ như “so” hoặc “because” để mạch lạc hơn. Giữ trong tối đa 3–4 câu.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car. Whenever my husband is driving, I take out my phone and snap random pictures so I can look back at the views later. I especially like photographing sunsets and rolling hills because they look beautiful in photos.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không trả lời trực tiếp (thiếu chủ đề và lý do). Luôn trả lời rõ ràng với câu chủ đề (“I prefer the mountains/the sea”) và thêm 1–2 chi tiết giải thích vì sao, kèm ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Sử dụng liên từ như “because” hoặc “because of” để hợp lý hóa lý do.

Example: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the fresh air. For instance, I like walking on mountain trails and admiring the views, which feels more peaceful than being at a crowded beach.

× Well, of course I do. I really like the scenery or sightseeing when I have to travel by bus or car is really relaxing and comfortable to look outside and see beautiful views.

✓ Well, of course I do. I really like the scenery when I travel by bus or car; looking outside and seeing the beautiful views is really relaxing and comfortable.

The original sentence has a run-on structure and unclear phrasing ('scenery or sightseeing' and 'when I have to travel... is really relaxing'). Combine ideas into clear clauses and use gerund phrase 'looking outside and seeing' as the subject of 'is'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to fix run-on. Suggestions: remove redundant 'sightseeing', use 'when I travel' (simple present for habitual action), and make the gerund phrase the subject of 'is'.

× Yeah, I really enjoy it. Whenever my husband drives me somewhere, I really enjoy taking out my phone and takes rent. Just take random pictures so that I can enjoy the moments and the sceneries later on.

✓ Yeah, I really enjoy it. Whenever my husband drives me somewhere, I really enjoy taking out my phone and taking pictures. I just take random pictures so that I can enjoy the moments and the scenery later on.

Errors: 'takes rent' is meaningless and likely a typo; 'taking out my phone and takes rent' mixes verb forms and subjects. Use parallel gerunds 'taking out... and taking pictures'. Use simple present 'I just take' for habitual action. 'Sceneries' is incorrect; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun. Suggestions: remove 'takes rent', keep verbs parallel, and use 'scenery' singular/uncountable. Maintain present tense for habits.

× Prefer.

✓ I prefer the mountains.

Single-word answer 'Prefer.' is incomplete and lacks a subject and object. Provide a full sentence matching the question (subject 'I' + verb 'prefer' + object 'the mountains' or 'the sea'). Ensure definite article 'the' before geographical features when contrasting choices. Suggestions: answer fully and clearly, e.g., 'I prefer the mountains.'