Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., “looking out of the window and seeing,” “when I am abroad”). Avoid redundancy and keep to at most 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy looking out of the window when I travel. For example, when I’m abroad I like seeing different buildings and local life, such as people walking dogs. I often take a few photos to remember unusual scenes.

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Use one clear reason and a linking phrase to add a brief detail. Replace awkward phrases like “picture and pause the time” with natural expressions such as “capture the moment.” Avoid repeating ideas (memory on phone and in memory).

Example: Yes, I often take photos through the window to capture the moment. I save the best shots on my phone so I can look back at them later or share them with friends.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear preference or explain a balanced view in a logical way. Correct grammar and structure (e.g., “I like both, but for different reasons”). Use linking words (however, because) and give one specific example for each choice. Keep to 2–3 sentences and finish the thought—avoid trailing off.

Example: I like both the mountains and the sea for different reasons. For example, the sea is great in summer for swimming and sunbathing, while the mountains are peaceful and romantic for long walks and scenic views.

× Yes, I really like looking out of the window and see buildings, cultures, especially when I am not in my country.

✓ Yes, I really like looking out of the window and seeing buildings and cultures, especially when I am not in my country.

The verb after 'like' and the coordinated structure should use the -ing form for parallelism: 'looking' pairs with 'seeing'. Also join items with 'and' for clarity.

× I really like to take in photos to see people walking dogs.

✓ I really like to take photos of people walking dogs.

Use the verb 'take' with the noun 'photos' and the preposition 'of' to indicate the subject of the photo. 'Take in photos' is incorrect phrasing; simplify to 'take photos of'. This falls under incorrect word use related to adjectives/nouns.

× Yes, I take a lot of photos of the scenery out of the window because I like to picture and pause the time so I can have that memory in my phone also in my memory so I can show them to the others.

✓ Yes, I take a lot of photos of the scenery outside the window because I like to capture and freeze the moment so I can keep the memory on my phone and in my mind to show others.

Use 'outside the window' rather than 'out of the window' for location. 'Picture and pause the time' is unnatural; use 'capture and freeze the moment'. Use 'on my phone' and 'in my mind' for correct prepositions. Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'others'.

× I really like to take photos to see people walking dogs.

✓ I really like to take photos of people walking dogs.

Repeating similar correction: 'to see people' is redundant; the object of 'take photos' should be 'of people'. This fixes incorrect object pronoun/phrase usage.

× I prefer both of them because see it's for the summer you go for tanning, spend time with friends also in mountains.

✓ I prefer both because, in summer, you can sunbathe and spend time with friends; the mountains are also nice.

Remove filler 'see' and restructure the sentence for clarity. Use 'in summer' and 'sunbathe' instead of 'go for tanning'. Ensure parallel verbs 'sunbathe and spend' and separate ideas with punctuation.

× It's more romantic I think because you can see it on the balcony and and looking on the mountains also in the.

✓ I think the mountains are more romantic because you can look at them from a balcony.

This sentence has repetition ('and and') and an unfinished clause. Simplify to a clear subject 'the mountains' and verb 'look at them'. Remove the trailing 'in the' and duplicate 'and'.