Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and grammatical errors, use a clear topic sentence, and provide one or two concise supporting details with linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "a fascinating view" / "fascinating views"). Aim for 3–4 fluent sentences and avoid filler sounds like "uh" and "umm."

Example: Yes. I always look out of the window when I travel because I enjoy memorizing the scenery and feeling relaxed. For example, watching fields and rivers helps me feel peaceful, so I try to observe details like colours and shapes to remember the trip.

Suggestion: Avoid fillers and incorrect word choices ("portals" -> "photos", "this moments" -> "these moments"). Start with a direct statement, then give a brief reason and a specific example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" but keep them concise.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window because I want to keep a record of interesting landscapes. For instance, I usually photograph mountain ridges or colourful fields and later organise them in an album.

Suggestion: Give a clear, complete answer with a topic sentence stating preference or that it depends on mood, then provide two short, specific reasons with linking words. Eliminate pauses and finish sentences fully. Use correct grammar: "it depends on my mood", "I prefer the mountains when..." or "I prefer the sea when...".

Example: It depends on my mood. I prefer the mountains when I need rest because the quiet air and green scenery help me relax, but I choose the sea when I want energy because the sound of waves and open horizon make me feel refreshed.

× I always look out the window at the scenery when I am traveling and it's my favorite thing because I would like to uh, save memories, umm, and feel a little bit tranquil when I see a fascinating views.

✓ I always look out the window at the scenery when I am traveling and it's my favorite thing because I would like to, uh, save memories, umm, and feel a little bit tranquil when I see a fascinating view.

The noun 'views' is plural but is modified by the singular adjective phrase 'a fascinating', which requires the singular noun 'view'. Use either 'a fascinating view' (singular) or 'fascinating views' (plural without 'a'). Also remove the extra article to match number. Suggestion: decide singular or plural and keep article consistent.

× I, you know, take portals of the scenery outside the car window, uh, because, uh, when I travel, I have a chance, uh, to see umm, uh, the fascinating landscape. So for me, it's very impressive. Uh, and I always try to capture this moments.

✓ I, you know, take photos of the scenery outside the car window, uh, because, uh, when I travel, I have a chance, uh, to see, umm, uh, the fascinating landscape. So for me, it's very impressive. Uh, and I always try to capture these moments.

Two issues: 'portals' is incorrect word choice; the correct word is 'photos' or 'pictures'. 'This moments' mixes singular demonstrative 'this' with plural 'moments'; use 'these moments'. Also keep consistent register: 'photos' fits spoken English. Suggestion: replace incorrect nouns and match demonstrative pronoun to plural.

× Uh, to be honest, uh, I uh, uh, can't say that it's a depends on my mood because sometimes I'm prefer the mountains, uh, and uh, when I am a little bit tired and I need the rest, I prefer the mountains, but when I want to, uh, be more energetic, I.

✓ Uh, to be honest, uh, I can't say that it depends on my mood because sometimes I prefer the mountains, and when I am a little bit tired and need rest, I prefer them, but when I want to be more energetic, I prefer the sea.

Multiple errors: 'it's a depends' is ungrammatical — correct is 'it depends' (verb 'depends' with subject 'it'). 'I'm prefer' incorrectly uses 'am' with the verb; correct is 'I prefer' (simple present). 'I prefer the mountains' later references should use pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition, or repeat full noun. The sentence also ends incomplete; add the contrasting preference 'I prefer the sea' to complete thought. Suggestions: remove unnecessary auxiliary verbs, use simple present for habitual preferences, ensure sentence completion and parallel structure.