Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct minor errors (e.g., “when travelling by bus” and “I notice things on the road”).

Example: Yes — I usually look out the window when I travel by bus because it gives me time to observe new places. For example, on a recent trip I noticed interesting buildings and small shops along the route, which helped me learn more about the local neighbourhood.

Suggestion: Keep the answer natural and add a brief specific example. Use correct subject-verb agreement and one linking phrase to connect ideas (e.g., “however” or “also”).

Example: Yes, I often take photos from car windows when we travel. Although my boyfriend takes most of the pictures and suggests good angles, I also snap photos of striking views — for instance, a coastal sunset we photographed last summer that still reminds us of the trip.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly with correct vocabulary and fewer grammatical mistakes. State preference in one sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear words (e.g., “inirgi”) and correct place name or say ‘my country/region’ if unsure.

Example: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I grew up in a hilly region without beaches, so coastal visits feel special to me. For example, whenever I have free time I go to the seaside to swim and relax, which helps me unwind and create happy memories.

× Yes, I love to look out from the window, but mainly by traveling from the bus.

✓ Yes, I love to look out of the window, but mainly when traveling by bus.

Use of prepositions: 'look out from the window' is unnatural; native usage is 'look out of the window'. 'By traveling from the bus' is incorrect preposition and word order; say 'when traveling by bus' to indicate mode of travel and time. Suggestion: use 'look out of the window' and 'when traveling by bus'.

× I love to explore the world by its view, so if it's a new way I love to check the places.

✓ I love to explore the world by its views, so if it's a new route I like to check out the places.

Pronoun and word choice: 'by its view' is unclear and mismatches noun number; 'views' fits better. 'new way' is awkward for a route or path; use 'route'. 'check the places' should be 'check out the places' or 'explore the places'. Suggestion: use clearer nouns (views, route) and the phrasal verb 'check out' for visiting or looking around.

× I notice everything in the road, mainly buildings.

✓ I notice everything on the road, mainly buildings.

Preposition: correct collocation is 'on the road' rather than 'in the road' when referring to things visible along a road. Suggestion: use 'on the road' for things alongside or on roads.

× My boyfriend usually take most of the pictures and often suggest good angles, but I also snap a few because the views are beautiful and make lasting memories.

✓ My boyfriend usually takes most of the pictures and often suggests good angles, but I also snap a few because the views are beautiful and create lasting memories.

Subject-verb agreement: 'boyfriend' is singular, so verbs require -s: 'takes' and 'suggests'. Word choice: 'make lasting memories' is acceptable, but 'create lasting memories' is more idiomatic. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with singular subjects and prefer 'create' for collocation with 'lasting memories'.

× I love sea more than mountains because I'm coming from Indici.

✓ I love the sea more than the mountains because I'm from Indici.

Articles and comparative context: use 'the sea' and 'the mountains' when speaking generally about these places. 'I'm coming from Indici' is less natural; use simple present 'I'm from Indici' to state origin. Suggestion: use definite articles when referring to general categories like 'the sea' and 'the mountains' and use 'I'm from' to indicate origin.

× It's a place with the hilly area, so beaches and the water allow most inirgi.

✓ It is a hilly place, so we don't have beaches or much access to the sea.

Multiple issues: original uses awkward phrasing and a nonword 'inirgi'. The intended meaning seems to be lack of beaches and water access because of hills. Rewritten to be clear and grammatical. Suggestion: express contrast clearly: 'It is a hilly place, so we don't have beaches or much access to the sea.' Avoid invented words and keep structure simple.

× We don't have any beach at all, so whenever I get time I love to go there and enjoy the water and I love playing in seaside.

✓ We don't have any beaches at all, so whenever I have time I love to go there and enjoy the water and play by the seaside.

Article and plural: 'beach' should be plural 'beaches' after 'any'. Tense/aspect: 'get time' is colloquial; 'have time' is more natural. 'playing in seaside' needs preposition and article: 'play by the seaside' or 'play at the seaside'. Suggestion: use plural after 'any' when appropriate, use 'have time', and correct preposition with 'seaside'.