Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda tidak menjawab pertanyaan; Anda hanya mengulangi pertanyaan pemeriksa. Untuk meningkatkan, langsung beri pernyataan topik (ya/tidak) lalu tambahkan 1–2 detail pendukung singkat. Gunakan kata penghubung jika perlu dan batasi jawaban maksimal 5 kalimat.

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching houses, trees and people because it helps me relax. Sometimes I also notice small details like street art or children playing.

Suggestion: Jawaban tidak jelas dan terdapat kesalahan kosakata serta tata bahasa (kata 'boat' dan 'puzzle' tidak sesuai konteks). Untuk memperbaiki, gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas ('Yes' atau 'No'), jelaskan frekuensi dan apa yang Anda ambil (photos/videos), dan sertakan contoh spesifik. Jaga struktur sederhana dan logis dengan linking words seperti 'sometimes' atau 'usually'.

Example: Yes, sometimes I take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when the view is impressive. For example, I often photograph sunsets or mountain ridges, and sometimes I record short videos to capture moving scenes.

Suggestion: Jawaban cukup jelas namun agak berbelit dan ada pengisi (uh) serta beberapa struktur kurang alami. Untuk meningkatkan, singkatkan menjadi topik sentence diikuti 1–2 alasan yang spesifik dan terorganisir menggunakan linking words seperti 'because' dan 'also'. Hindari pengisi kata dan ulangi ide yang sama.

Example: I prefer the sea because I enjoy the feeling of the water and the relaxed atmosphere. Also, beaches are easier to access than mountain trails, so I can unwind without much effort.

× Sometime I take the boat, sometime I took the puzzle when the view is good, but sometimes I took videos too.

✓ Sometimes I take the boat; sometimes I take photos when the view is good, and sometimes I take videos too.

The sentence has inconsistent verb tenses and wrong word choice. Use 'sometimes' (pluralized) and keep verb tense consistent: 'take' for habitual actions. 'Took' (past) is incorrect here because the question asks about typical behavior. 'Puzzle' is likely a wrong word; replaced with 'photos' to match context. Also use conjunctions or punctuation to join clauses clearly. Suggestion: use consistent present simple for habitual actions and choose correct vocabulary. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer the sea because, uh, we can feel the water, but if the mountain, we just see the view and have a little effort to go to the mountain but no effort to the sea. I feel like that.

✓ I prefer the sea because we can feel the water, but with the mountains we only see the view and need a little effort to climb them, while the sea requires no effort. That's how I feel.

Several issues: incorrect conditional phrasing ('if the mountain' should be 'with the mountains'), awkward quantifiers ('a little effort' needs clearer verb) and plural consistency ('mountain' -> 'mountains', 'them'). Rearranged sentence for clarity and correct use of quantifiers and plurality. Use present simple for preferences. Suggestion: keep subjects consistent in number and use parallel structure for comparison. Grammar problem type ID:14

× Do you look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car?

✓ Do you look out of the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car?

Preposition choice and adverbial phrase: 'look out of the window' is more natural in this context than 'look out the window'. Also ensure consistency in American/British spelling: 'traveling' (American) is acceptable. Suggestion: place 'out of' before 'the window' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?

✓ Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?

This question is already grammatically correct; no change needed. It uses present simple correctly for habitual action. Kept as is. Grammar problem type ID:26