Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct by using a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use correct verb forms and reduce redundancy. For example, say you enjoy watching the scenery and briefly explain why or give a specific example of what you like to notice.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching changing landscapes, such as fields and small villages, because it helps me relax and notice local life.

Suggestion: Provide a complete, grammatically correct sentence and add a short reason. Connect ideas with a linking word (because/so) and avoid short fragments. Explain briefly when you might take photos to add richness.

Example: No, I usually prefer to enjoy the view because taking photos from a moving vehicle rarely turns out well. However, if I see something special, I might ask the driver to stop so I can take a picture.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence and use linking words to compare and justify your preference. Avoid awkward phrases like “their own relief”; use clearer vocabulary (characteristics, atmosphere). Give a brief specific reason for each preference to make the answer more informative.

Example: I like both the mountains and the sea, but I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the peaceful atmosphere. For my children, I would choose the sea since beaches offer safe swimming and lots of fun activities for them.

× Yes, for sure I am. Enjoying look at the same scenery when I traveled by bus or car, even by the airplane.

✓ Yes, for sure I am. I enjoy looking at the scenery when I travel by bus or car, and even from an airplane.

Original has tense and form problems: 'Enjoying look' is incorrect verb form (should be 'I enjoy looking' — verb + -ing or base with subject). 'When I traveled' mixes past with present context; the question asks about habitual action, so use simple present 'when I travel'. 'By the airplane' is incorrect preposition and article; use 'from an airplane' or 'in an airplane'. Suggest practicing subject + simple present verb for habits and using gerund after enjoy. Grammar problem type ID:6

× No, usually I prefer to enjoy. This scenery.

✓ No, usually I prefer to enjoy the scenery.

The original splits the sentence awkwardly and uses a period mid-phrase. 'Prefer to enjoy' is acceptable but more natural is 'prefer to enjoy the scenery' or 'prefer enjoying the scenery'. Combine into one sentence. Also ensure object 'the scenery' follows the verb. Suggest using either 'prefer to + verb' or 'prefer + -ing' consistently. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Actually, I like both of them.

✓ Actually, I like both.

'Both of them' is not wrong but is redundant when the noun is clear from context. More natural is 'I like both.' If keeping 'both of them', ensure antecedent clear. This is a stylistic pronoun use issue; use concise pronoun forms. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Each of them has their own relief, but I prefer the mountains more than the sea.

✓ Each of them has its own charm, but I prefer the mountains to the sea.

Several issues: 'Each of them has their' mixes singular 'each' with plural pronoun 'their' (incorrect pronoun agreement) — use 'its'. Also 'relief' is an odd noun here; 'charm' or 'features' is more natural. 'Prefer the mountains more than the sea' is wordy; use 'prefer the mountains to the sea.' Suggest matching singular subjects with singular pronouns and using correct comparison structure. Grammar problem type ID:12

× But for my children, of course I will choose the sea.

✓ But for my children, of course I would choose the sea.

Context is expressing preference in a hypothetical or conditional sense (choosing for children), so 'would' is more natural than future 'will'. If speaker means a definite future decision, 'I will choose the sea for my children' is acceptable. Suggest choosing modal consistent with intended meaning: 'would' for hypothetical, 'will' for definite future. Grammar problem type ID:7