Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use correct verb forms and articles. Add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. (English (Japan))

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy looking out at the scenery when I travel, because it shows how places differ. For example, when I visited a rural area in Japan, the landscape was much quieter and greener than in the city, so I felt surprised by how peaceful it was.

Suggestion: Correct sentence structure and provide a clear, coherent example. Avoid unclear or incorrect facts and finish your sentences. Use linking words to connect reason and example. (English (Japan))

Example: Yes, I often take photos from the car because the view outside is usually clearer and more dramatic. For example, last summer I photographed a mountain range from the highway, and the early morning light made the peaks look very impressive.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and complete your supporting detail. Mention one or two specific reasons and use linking words. Keep within 3–4 sentences. (English (Japan))

Example: I prefer the mountains because they change dramatically with the seasons. For example, in spring you can see cherry blossoms on the slopes, and in autumn the leaves turn vivid red and orange, which makes hiking very enjoyable.

× Yes, I do because I like watching scenery in different cities.

✓ Yes, I do because I like watching the scenery in different cities.

The noun 'scenery' is usually uncountable and often requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific or general set of views. Add 'the' to make the sentence natural in English. Suggestion: Use 'the scenery' when referring to views in cities, or 'scenery' without article when speaking very generally.

× For example, when I visit When I visit rural area in Japan, the scenery were different from those in urban area and I was surprised.

✓ For example, when I visited a rural area in Japan, the scenery was different from that in urban areas, and I was surprised.

Multiple issues: repetition 'when I visit When I visit' is a duplication (sentence structure error). Tense should be past 'visited' to match 'I was surprised' (past tense). 'Rural area' needs an article 'a'. 'Scenery' is uncountable so use singular verb 'was' not 'were' (subject-verb agreement/present tense issue). Compare 'those in urban area' should be 'that in urban areas' or 'that in urban areas' to match singular 'scenery' and plural 'areas'. Suggestion: Remove duplication, use past tense consistently, add articles 'a' and 'that', and use 'was' for 'scenery'.

× Yes, I do, because it's more beautiful than when I take a picture inside the car.

✓ Yes, I do, because it's more beautiful than when I take a picture inside the car.

This sentence is kept as present simple to match the question about general habit; however, if the student intended to compare a past event, use past tense: 'it was more beautiful than when I took a picture inside the car.' Suggestion: Ensure tense consistency with context: keep present simple for habits, or change to past tense for a specific past event.

× For example, when I took a picture of the mountain in the car, it was North Korea and the.

✓ For example, when I took a picture of a mountain from the car, it looked like North Korea.

Original sentence is incomplete and unclear ('it was North Korea and the.'). Use 'a mountain' with article, 'from the car' is a clearer prepositional phrase, and 'looked like' expresses appearance. Remove dangling 'and the.' Suggestion: Provide a complete comparison or description; use 'a' before 'mountain' and 'from the car' for clarity.

× I prefer mountains because mountains has different sceneries in Four Seasons.

✓ I prefer the mountains because they have different scenery in the four seasons.

Several issues: plural subject 'mountains' requires plural verb 'have' (subject-verb agreement). 'Scenery' is uncountable, so use singular 'scenery' not 'sceneries'. Use the definite article 'the mountains' when speaking generally about mountains as a category. 'Four Seasons' should be 'the four seasons' and not capitalized unless it's a proper noun. Suggestion: Use 'the mountains' and 'they have different scenery in the four seasons.'

× For example, in spring cherry blossoms blooms in the mountains and when it is autumn it has.

✓ For example, in spring cherry blossoms bloom in the mountains, and in autumn the mountains are beautiful with colorful leaves.

Errors: subject-verb agreement 'cherry blossoms blooms' should be 'cherry blossoms bloom' because plural subject needs plural verb. The clause 'when it is autumn it has.' is incomplete and unclear. Provide a full clause describing autumn (e.g., 'the mountains are beautiful with colorful leaves'). Suggestion: Ensure plural subjects take plural verbs and complete the sentence with a clear description of autumn scenery.