Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct countable/uncountable errors (use "many" for plural). Avoid repetition and long run-on sentences.

Example: No, there aren’t many tall buildings near my home. My neighbourhood mainly has two-storey houses, so most buildings are low-rise and residential.

Suggestion: Give a clear yes/no topic sentence and then explain briefly with specific details. Use correct verbs and vocabulary (e.g., "I like to take photos of buildings when I visit the city"). Avoid unclear words like "Adla," "mirror," or "bicep" unless you mean something specific — choose precise descriptions.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I visit the city. I especially like capturing interesting facades and reflections on glass surfaces to show the contrast between old and modern architecture.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and give a reason or a specific example. Use linking words for clarity (e.g., "however," "at the moment"). Keep it to 1–2 supporting sentences.

Example: Not at the moment. However, in the future I might want to visit the Burj Khalifa because I’m curious about its observation deck and panoramic city views.

Suggestion: Give a clear, structured response: state your current preference, then contrast with a possible future choice using linking words (e.g., "but," "on the other hand"). Correct grammar ("two-storey house," "sometimes," "rooftop apartment"). Avoid irrelevant phrases like "sing the word."

Example: I prefer living in a two-storey house at the moment because I love the space and privacy. However, I might consider living in a high-rise rooftop apartment in the future for the views and city lifestyle.

× No, there are not as much tall buildings near my home as my neighbourhood consists of the usually two story buildings people living in small houses so there aren't any tall building in my neighborhood.

✓ No, there are not as many tall buildings near my home; my neighbourhood usually consists of two-story houses, so there aren't any tall buildings in my neighborhood.

Used 'much' with countable noun 'buildings' (should be 'many'); mismatched singular/plural 'tall building' vs context (should be 'tall buildings'); word order and article issues corrected. Suggestion: use 'many' for countable plural nouns and keep noun forms consistent (plural for multiple items).

× Yes, Adla I to take photos of the building whenever I visit the main city area usually with the mirror around the building so I like to capture bicep and building together.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of buildings whenever I visit the city center, usually capturing the mirror reflections around them, so I like to capture people and buildings together.

Original sentence lacks correct verb form and has unclear nouns. 'I to take' is incorrect; use 'I like to take' (verb phrase). 'Main city area' better as 'city center'. 'Mirror around the building' likely 'mirror reflections around them'. 'Bicep' incorrect; likely 'people' or 'biceps'—context fits 'people'. Suggestion: use correct verb phrases (like + infinitive) and ensure nouns match intended meaning; use present simple for habitual actions.

× Not any maybe in the future, but recently I haven't got any building on mine to visit.

✓ Not really, maybe in the future, but recently I haven't had any particular building in mind to visit.

Sentence structure is awkward and uses incorrect verb 'got' and preposition 'on mine'. 'Have in mind' is the correct phrase. Tense and aspect corrected to present perfect 'haven't had' for recent experience. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'have in mind' and correct auxiliary verbs for present perfect.

× It's so hard to answer because right now I'm living in two stories a house which I absolutely love but sometime maybe I would like to live in a tall building on a top on a rooftop apartments and sing the word from my window.

✓ It's hard to answer because right now I'm living in a two-story house which I absolutely love, but sometime in the future I might like to live in a tall building, in a rooftop apartment, and sing out loud from my window.

Problems: 'two stories a house' should be 'two-story house' (adjective form); 'sometime maybe I would like' rewritten to 'sometime in the future I might like' for correct modality and time expression; 'on a top on a rooftop apartments' incorrect prepositions and pluralization—use 'in a rooftop apartment'; 'sing the word' unclear—likely 'sing out loud'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms for compound numbers (two-story), correct modal verbs (might), and proper prepositions ('in' a building/apartment).