Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct sentence structure (subject-verb agreement), avoid filler words (uh, you know), and simplify phrasing. Organize answer with a clear topic sentence then one supporting detail. Add a linking word when giving the reason.

Example: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home in Dubai. They range from about 70 to 150 metres high, which means we often cannot enjoy a wide view from the lower floors. Because of the high-rise towers, the sunlight and sightlines can be limited.

Suggestion: Be concise and avoid repetition: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Use precise vocabulary and finish the sentence; avoid trailing off.

Example: Yes, I often photograph buildings because I enjoy architectural details. For example, I like glass facades and balconies since their reflections and textures create interesting compositions in my photos.

Suggestion: Structure and accuracy: open with a clear statement, then give specific features using linking words (for example, because, and). Use correct grammar (e.g., 'it has' not 'there have') and avoid filler words.

Example: Yes. I would like to visit a 36-storey building in Goregaon because it has a rooftop garden and several sports facilities. For instance, there is a ground-level swimming pool as well as football and cricket courts, which make it very attractive.

Suggestion: Clarify and vary sentence structure: state your opinion directly, then give specific reasons with linking words. Correct word choice (e.g., 'tall building' not 'tolerance building') and remove hesitations to improve fluency.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building, especially if it has a balcony. I enjoy watching sunrises and sunsets from above, and the higher floors usually have fresher air and less street noise and pollution.

× Yeah, it's so a very tall buildings near my, my home, even in sand Dubai, it's around uh, 70 to 150 meters tall buildings nearby my complexes.

✓ Yes, there are very tall buildings near my home in Dubai. They are around 70 to 150 meters tall and near my complexes.

The original sentence has article and count noun errors: 'a very tall buildings' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'buildings'. Also 'it's so' is informal and incorrect here. Use 'there are' for existence of plural nouns (There be issue/Plural). Rearranged for clarity and corrected place name 'in Dubai'. Suggestion: Use 'there is' with singular and 'there are' with plural, remove unnecessary fillers and keep the noun number consistent.

× And sometimes it gets a little difficult because of the uh, we can cannot enjoy the view, you know, because of the high rise tower.

✓ And sometimes it gets a little difficult because we cannot enjoy the view due to the high-rise towers.

The sentence shows incorrect auxiliary/modal placement and subject-verb issues: 'we can cannot' is ungrammatical (double modal/negation). Also 'high rise tower' mismatches plural 'towers' implied by context. Use 'cannot' or 'can't' correctly and 'due to' or 'because of' for cause. Suggestion: Keep one modal/auxiliary and match noun number with context.

× Yeah, of course I'd like to take the photos of the building because I love the tower and the elevation and the facade and, and the sections of the buildings, especially with the glass facade, uh, because of the reflections and all that and the carmines and the elevation and the balcony, everything. I just.

✓ Yes, of course I like to take photos of buildings because I love the towers, the elevations, and the facades, especially glass facades because of the reflections, the colors, the balconies, and other details.

The original contains redundant fragments and incorrect noun forms ('the photos of the building' better as 'photos of buildings') and an incomplete sentence 'I just.'. Also 'carmine' likely intended 'colors'—unclear word. Replaced with 'colors' and pluralized consistently. Present participle issues include unnecessary '-ing' forms and fragmentation. Suggestion: Use complete sentences, remove trailing fillers, and keep noun number and list items parallel.

× Yeah, I love to visit. Uh, there's a building in, uh, Goregaon, uh, I just wanted to visit the building because that is 36 Storey and the best part is there have a upper garden on the terrace and there's a swimming pool at the ground level and the football court and the cricket court.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit a building in Goregaon. It is 36 storeys, and the best part is that it has an upper garden on the terrace, a swimming pool at ground level, a football court, and a cricket court.

Multiple errors: mixed tenses and incorrect 'there have' (should be 'it has' for singular building). '36 Storey' should be '36 storeys' (plural) or '36-storey'. Use 'would like' or 'want' consistently. Corrected 'there's a building' to 'a building' and used 'it has' to describe features. Suggestion: Use 'there is/there are' correctly for existence, and use 'has' to attribute features to a singular noun.

× Yeah, I love to, specially if there's a balcony because I just love to see the sunset and sunrise through the balcony.

✓ Yes, I would especially like it if there were a balcony because I love to see the sunset and sunrise from the balcony.

Use of 'the balcony' twice is acceptable but 'through the balcony' is incorrect preposition; 'from the balcony' is correct. 'specially' should be 'especially'. Also 'I love to' needs an object: 'I would especially like it if there were a balcony.' Suggestion: Use 'from' for viewpoint and 'especially' spelling; use conditional 'would' for preferences.

× So I love to stay in the tolerance building, uh, because, you know, the wind and, uh, this the, the, the pollution is very less on the top.

✓ So I would love to stay in a tall building because the wind is better and the pollution is much lower at the top.

'Tolerance building' is likely a mispronunciation of 'tall building' or 'high-rise'; corrected to 'tall building'. 'The pollution is very less' is incorrect comparative/adverb use; use 'much lower' or 'less pollution'. Also remove repeated filler words. Use 'would' for preference. Suggestion: Use appropriate adjectives ('tall' or 'high-rise') and correct comparative forms ('lower' not 'less' with 'very').