Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Focus on clarity, correct grammar, and relevant details. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether there are tall buildings, then give one or two specific supporting details (location, typical height, style). Use correct vocabulary (e.g. "detached houses", "neighbourhood", "two or three storeys") and keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences. Use linking words like "however" or "in contrast" only if adding a comparison.

Example: There are not many tall buildings near my home; most houses are detached and low-rise. I live in a residential area of Milan where buildings are usually two or three storeys high. The neighbourhood feels spacious and many houses have small gardens, which makes it look similar to some European countryside towns.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give specific reasons and examples. Use smoother sentence structures and correct collocations (e.g. "I take photos of buildings, especially historic architecture"). Mention when and how you take photos and what you focus on. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially historic architecture. I find old churches and palaces stunning, so I take close-ups of their decorative details and wider shots of the facades. For example, last month I photographed the carved stonework on a 16th-century church to capture its intricate patterns.

Suggestion: Be precise with names and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the building (e.g. "Saint Basil's Cathedral in Moscow"). Give specific reasons for wanting to visit and one or two supporting details (appearance, where you saw it). Avoid irrelevant words and keep to a few sentences.

Example: I would like to visit Saint Basil's Cathedral in Moscow. I have seen it many times in TV programs and postcards; its colourful onion domes and ornate patterns look like something from a storybook. I want to see the interior decoration and take photographs of the exterior in winter.

Suggestion: Give a clear main idea and support it with specific, grammatical reasons. Use correct phrases (e.g. "I prefer not to live in a tall building because apartments tend to be small and lack outdoor space"). Compare alternatives concisely and use linking words like "because" or "instead" to show contrast.

Example: I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because apartments there are often quite small and I would miss having outdoor space. Instead, I prefer a detached house with a garden where I can relax and enjoy more privacy.

× Yes, there are some detect house near my home.

✓ Yes, there are some detached houses near my home.

The sentence uses singular nouns and incorrect form 'detect house'. The correct plural is 'houses' and the adjective is 'detached'. Use plural to agree with 'some'.

× I live in Milan where it's pretty broad and have many pretty far the resident and they're usually build their homes in their paedophiles.

✓ I live in Milan where it's quite large and has many residents who usually build their homes in neighborhoods.

Multiple errors: 'pretty broad' is awkward—use 'quite large'; subject-verb agreement and verb forms: 'have many pretty far the resident' is incorrect: use 'has many residents'; relative clause needs 'who usually build'. 'Paedophiles' is wrong word; likely 'neighborhoods'. Maintain present tense and correct noun forms.

× The houses are always have two or three floor.

✓ The houses always have two or three floors.

Incorrect combination 'are always have' mixes auxiliary 'are' with main verb 'have'. Remove 'are'. Also plural 'floors' required for countable plural.

× Some of them looks like some building at European countryside or minimally.

✓ Some of them look like buildings in the European countryside or small villas.

'Some of them' is plural so use 'look'. 'some building at European countryside' needs plural 'buildings' and preposition 'in the European countryside'. 'minimally' is wrong word; perhaps 'small villas' or 'cottages'.

× Yes, I take photo of buildings.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings.

Use plural 'photos' when speaking generally about taking multiple pictures.

× The same I take photographs is ancient architecture.

✓ I also take photographs of ancient architecture.

Word order is incorrect and missing preposition 'of'. Use 'also' for 'the same' meaning, and correct noun order.

× Those buildings look stunning and breathtaking.

✓ Those buildings look stunning and breathtaking.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. 'Stunning and breathtaking' are appropriate adjectives describing buildings.

× I always take close up photos of their elegant decoration and take photo of hall structure to record their brilliant.

✓ I always take close-up photos of their elegant decorations and photos of the hall structures to record their brilliance.

Use hyphenated 'close-up' as adjective, plural 'decorations' and 'photos', plural 'hall structures' if referring to multiple buildings, and 'brilliance' as noun. Maintain parallel structure: 'take photos of... and photos of...'.

× I would like to visit Krashnaya proceed in Russia.

✓ I would like to visit Krasnaya Ploshchad in Russia.

The original seems to attempt a place name; replace with likely 'Krasnaya Ploshchad' (Red Square). 'Would like to visit' is correct conditional; correct proper noun spelling.

× I have seen those plays in TV program and postcard before.

✓ I have seen those places on TV programs and postcards before.

Use 'places' not 'plays'; preposition 'on TV' and plural 'programs'. 'postcard' should be plural 'postcards' for general reference.

× The scene of colorful Orthodox Church in the snow looks like the castle in storybooks.

✓ The scene of a colorful Orthodox church in the snow looks like a castle in storybooks.

Articles needed: 'a colorful Orthodox church' and 'a castle'. Lowercase 'church' unless part of a name.

× I wish I will have opportunity to visit those bravery church.

✓ I hope I will have the opportunity to visit those beautiful churches.

'Wish' with future 'will' is incorrect; use 'hope' or 'wish I could'. Add article 'the opportunity'. 'Bravery church' is wrong; likely 'beautiful churches' (or 'brave' not appropriate). Use plural 'churches' if referring to multiple.

× I don't want to live in a tall building, the room tall building are usually really narrow that my life space will be limited in this small house, in contrast of detect house in a small, spacious and comfortable land, live in a crowded community.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building. Rooms in tall buildings are usually very narrow, so my living space would be limited. In contrast, detached houses are often small but spacious and comfortable, and people there live in less crowded communities.

Original is a run-on with many word choice errors: 'room tall building are' should be 'rooms in tall buildings are'; use 'very narrow' not 'really'; use conditional 'would be' for hypothetical; 'detect house' -> 'detached houses'; clarify contrast and correct 'crowded community' meaning. Break into multiple sentences for clarity.