Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one specific detail. Avoid fillers like “uh” and redundant phrases (e.g. “close to the near”). Use proper prepositions (near my home / close to my home).

Example: Yes. There are a few tall buildings close to my home. For example, a 20-storey apartment block stands about five minutes’ walk from my flat.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear reason with one or two specific details. Use correct tense and noun forms (I don’t take photos / I haven’t taken photos). Avoid confusing phrases like “buildings are out of society.”

Example: No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I mostly photograph people and events. For instance, I prefer photographing family gatherings rather than architecture.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence naming the building you want to visit and one or two specific reasons. Use correct grammar and avoid contradictory or unclear phrases (e.g. saying it is near and not near). Use linking words for coherence (for example, because, so).

Example: Yes. I would like to visit a nearby residential complex called Green Towers because it is peaceful and has many gardens. For example, I’ve heard there are quiet courtyards and tree-lined paths which would be nice to see.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a specific reason or two. Clarify what you mean by ‘Providence’ if it is a place or a building. Use linking words to expand briefly (for example, because or since).

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building, especially in the neighborhood called Providence, because it has good amenities and nice views. For example, living on a high floor would give me a quiet environment and a great view of the city.

× Yes, uh, I have a close to the near tall building in at near my home.

✓ Yes, there is a tall building near my home.

The original sentence uses multiple incorrect prepositions and word order ('close to the near', 'in at near'). Use the existential construction 'There is' for existence and the correct preposition 'near' after the noun. Suggestion: say 'There is a tall building near my home.' to be clear and grammatical.

× No, I didn't take a photos building because I'm living it, living in society.

✓ No, I haven't taken photos of buildings because I live in a community.

The speaker mixed past simple negative ('didn't take') with a plural noun and incorrect noun phrase order. Use present perfect ('haven't taken') to indicate experience up to now, use the plural noun correctly ('photos of buildings'), and use 'live in a community' instead of 'living it, living in society.' Suggestion: use 'I haven't taken photos of buildings because I live in a community.'

× Buildings are out of society, so that's why I didn't click the photos of buildings.

✓ Buildings are outside private areas, so I didn't take photos of them.

'Out of society' is unnatural and 'click the photos' is informal and wrong collocation here. Use 'outside private areas' or 'in private areas' and the verb 'take photos of'. Also replace the repeated noun with pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: 'Buildings are outside private areas, so I didn't take photos of them.'

× Yes, I there are building that would I like to visit.

✓ Yes, there is a building that I would like to visit.

Word order is incorrect and subject-verb agreement is wrong ('there are building'). Use 'There is' for singular 'a building' and correct word order 'that I would like to visit.' Suggestion: 'Yes, there is a building that I would like to visit.'

× This is the near at my home, this residency and I like the most because the building isn't near at my home and is, uh, these buildings in too much peace and like no pollutions and etcetera.

✓ It is near my home; it is a residence that I like the most because the area is peaceful and has little pollution.

Multiple errors: incorrect prepositions ('near at my home'), redundant and unclear phrases ('this residency'), subject-verb agreement ('these buildings in too much peace'), and incorrect noun 'pollutions'. Rewrite for clarity: 'It is near my home; it is a residence that I like the most because the area is peaceful and has little pollution.' Suggestion: simplify and use 'area is peaceful' and 'little pollution.'

× Yes, I really want to live in Providence.

✓ Yes, I really want to live in a high-rise building.

The student's answer 'live in Providence' likely misuses a proper noun unrelated to the question about tall buildings. To correct grammar and match context, provide a clear answer using the correct preposition 'in' with the noun phrase 'a high-rise building.' If the student meant a specific place named Providence, then 'Yes, I really want to live in Providence.' is grammatically fine; however, given context, a more relevant response is '...live in a high-rise building.'