Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve clarity and coherence by correcting grammar mistakes, removing repetition, and using a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you prefer about the area (e.g., peace, air quality, community). Keep the reply to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Example: Not really. I live in a fairly quiet neighbourhood, so most buildings are low-rise and there are many open spaces and trees. I prefer it that way because it feels peaceful and the air is fresher than in busier parts of the city.

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and complete by finishing the final thought, avoiding vague phrases, and adding a brief reason or example. Use linking words (for example, because) to make the response coherent. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, occasionally, especially when a building has an interesting or unusual design. I'm particularly drawn to modern architecture because of its clean lines and creative shapes, so I often photograph buildings that have striking facades or unusual spaces.

Suggestion: This answer is clear and well-structured. To improve further, add a specific detail about what you would do there or what aspect interests you most (e.g., attend a concert, study the sails-shaped roofs). Use one linking word to show reason or plan.

Example: Yes, definitely. I'd love to visit the Sydney Opera House because I'm fascinated by its sail-shaped roofs and waterfront setting. I would like to take a guided tour and attend a concert there to fully appreciate the architecture and acoustics.

Suggestion: Clarify and complete the final sentence, correct grammar errors, and give a specific reason for preferring a middle or upper floor (e.g., less noise, better view). Keep to 3–4 concise sentences and use linking words (however, because) for coherence.

Example: Yes, I'd enjoy living in a tall building for the view, especially at night when the city lights are beautiful. However, I'd probably choose a middle or upper-floor apartment because it's quieter and still offers a good view without being too high.

× Most of the buildings are real relatively low rise and they are quite a few open spaces and trees.

✓ Most of the buildings are relatively low-rise, and there are quite a few open spaces and trees.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement and word order/phrasing issues. 'real relatively low rise' is incorrect adjective order and word choice; 'relatively low-rise' is correct adjective form. Also 'they are quite a few open spaces' incorrectly uses 'they' as subject for 'are'; the correct impersonal construction is 'there are quite a few open spaces.' Suggestion: use 'relatively low-rise' for the adjective and 'there are' to state existence of spaces and trees.

× I actually prefer it that way because the area the area feels.

✓ I actually prefer it that way because the area feels peaceful.

The original sentence repeats 'the area' and ends abruptly with no complement to the verb 'feels', creating a sentence structure error. Add an adjective complement (for example 'peaceful' or 'calm') to complete the clause. Suggestion: complete predicates by providing an adjective after 'feels' or rephrase as 'because the area feels peaceful.'

× But it's not.

✓ But it's not very common.

'But it's not.' is a sentence fragment that lacks a clear complement; context implies 'common' or 'usual' (i.e., taking photos of buildings is not common). Provide a clear adjective or clause to complete the thought. Suggestion: finish the sentence with an adjective or phrase such as 'very common' or 'something I do often.'

× I like the idea of having a great view of the city, especially at night when all the lights are on.

✓ I like the idea of having a great view of the city, especially at night when all the lights are on.

No grammatical error detected that maps to the provided list; sentence is correct as written. No changes necessary.

× However, I'd probably chosen chose and an apartment on a middle or upper.

✓ However, I'd probably choose an apartment on a middle or upper floor.

The original uses 'chosen chose and' which is incorrect verb form and word order. After 'I'd probably' (I would probably), the base verb 'choose' should follow (modal + base form). Also 'on a middle or upper' is incomplete; add 'floor' to specify location. Suggestion: use 'I'd probably choose an apartment on a middle or upper floor.'

× I'm particularly drawn to modern architecture, so if a building has an unusual space or a striking appearance, I might take a photo of it.

✓ I'm particularly drawn to modern architecture, so if a building has an unusual shape or a striking appearance, I might take a photo of it.

The phrase 'unusual space' is likely a word choice/meaning error rather than a listed grammar category; to fit grammar categories, treat as sentence structure/word choice issue. 'Unusual shape' fits context (design). Suggestion: use 'shape' or 'form' instead of 'space' to describe architectural appearance.

× I'd love to visit the Sydney Opera House one day.

✓ I'd love to visit the Sydney Opera House one day.

Sentence is grammatically correct and uses the proper article (the) for a named landmark; no change needed.

× I've seen it in photographs and videos and I'm fascinated by its unique design and beautiful location.

✓ I've seen it in photographs and videos, and I'm fascinated by its unique design and beautiful location.

The original sentence is correct in tense and structure. Only a comma is suggested before 'and' for clarity but this is optional. No grammatical tense error found.

× Are there tall buildings near your home?

✓ Are there tall buildings near your home?

Question sentence is correct; 'buildings' plural is appropriate with 'are there.' No change needed.

× I might take a photo of it.

✓ I might take a photo of it.

This sentence correctly uses the modal verb 'might' followed by base verb 'take.' No correction necessary.