Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar (use correct verb forms and articles), make the response more natural and concise, and add one short supporting detail. For example, begin with a clear topic sentence, correct "I'm live" to "I live", use "there aren't any" or "there are no", and optionally say why (e.g. rural area or farmland). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I live in a village, so there are no tall buildings near my home. Most buildings around here are small houses and farms, so the skyline is quite low.

Suggestion: Make the answer more organised and grammatical, avoid repeating phrases like "click pics", and use linking words to list what you photograph. Use specific examples and vocabulary such as "landscapes, historic buildings, rivers". Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs. I usually take pictures of landscapes, rivers and historic buildings because I like capturing interesting architecture and cultural details. For example, I often photograph old temples and colonial-era houses when I travel.

Suggestion: Use correct articles and plurality, and give a clearer reason why you want to visit. Name the building(s) correctly, say they are hotels, and explain briefly what attracts you (architecture, interiors, photography). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "for example" or "because".

Example: Yes, there are a few buildings I'd like to visit, such as The Oberoi and similar hotels in Chandigarh. I want to visit them because of their elegant architecture and luxurious interiors, and I would like to take photographs of their design.

Suggestion: Correct grammar ("I have a fear of heights" is fine, but use "so I don't want" instead of "can't want"). Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail about your current home. Keep within 2–3 sentences and use linking word "so" or "because".

Example: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I have a fear of heights. I am happy living in my single-storey, two-room house which feels comfortable and safe.

× Well, I'm live in the village and that's why there is not any tall building near my home.

✓ Well, I live in a village, and that's why there are no tall buildings near my home.

Used 'I'm live' which is incorrect; correct verb is 'I live' (simple present). Also 'there is not any tall building' is wrong because 'tall building' is plural here; use 'there are no tall buildings'. Use 'a village' for non-specific place. Improve by using 'I live' + 'there are no' for plural reference.

× Well I am a person who like to click pics and that's why I like to click pics of nature buildings, mountains, river and that's why I like to click pictures of building like the tall buildings and the buildings who have the logic of historic and culture things.

✓ Well, I am a person who likes to take pictures, and that's why I like to photograph natural scenes such as mountains and rivers. I also like to take pictures of tall buildings and buildings that have historical and cultural significance.

Several issues: 'who like' should be 'who likes' (subject-verb agreement with relative pronoun referring to 'I' or 'person'); 'click pics' is informal — use 'take pictures' or 'photograph'; 'nature buildings' is incorrect — use 'natural scenes'; 'river' should be plural or 'a river' in list; 'pictures of building' should be plural 'buildings'; 'who have the logic of historic and culture things' is ungrammatical — use 'that have historical and cultural significance'. Use present simple for habits and ensure correct verb forms and noun forms.

× Yes, there is a few buildings there where I want to go and one of the building which name is the Obera and Sukwilas and that building is very expensive because it's a hotel in Chandigarh and I want to visit at that hotel to clicking pictures.

✓ Yes, there are a few buildings I want to visit there, and one of the buildings is called The Oberoi and Sukwilas. That building is very expensive because it is a hotel in Chandigarh, and I want to visit that hotel to take pictures.

Used 'there is a few buildings' — 'a few buildings' is plural so use 'there are a few buildings'. 'One of the building' should be 'one of the buildings'. 'which name is' is incorrect; use 'is called'. 'I want to visit at that hotel' — preposition error, use 'visit that hotel'. 'to clicking pictures' — gerund incorrect after 'to'; use infinitive 'to take pictures'. Also corrected proper names (The Oberoi) and clarified sentence flow.

× Well, to be honest, I have a fear of heights and that's why I can't want to live in a tall building.

✓ Well, to be honest, I have a fear of heights, and that's why I don't want to live in a tall building.

'I can't want' is incorrect modal/auxiliary usage. Express desire with 'I don't want' or inability with 'I can't'. Here intent is preference, so use 'I don't want'. Keep present simple for preference.

× I am happy in my home and my home have two rooms with one floor.

✓ I am happy in my home, and my home has two rooms on one floor.

Subject-verb agreement: 'my home have' should be 'my home has' (singular subject requires singular verb). Also 'with one floor' is better expressed as 'on one floor' or 'with one storey'. Use consistent singular forms and correct preposition.