Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammar mistakes, and add one specific detail. Use linking words if you expand. Keep it under 4–5 short sentences.

Example: Yes, there are a few tall buildings near my home. Although my hometown is mostly low-rise, these high-rise blocks stand out and look impressive. Because we don't have many tall buildings in my province, I often walk there to admire their design.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct basic grammar (articles, plural nouns), and explain why you photograph buildings with a specific example. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings as a hobby. I especially enjoy photographing skyscrapers because they are rare in my province. For example, I recently took several pictures of a glass tower to remember its reflection at sunset.

Suggestion: Answer directly naming the building or place, use correct grammar and add a reason with one specific detail. Use a linking word to make the answer coherent and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the tallest office tower in the IT Park. It has many modern features and impressive architecture, and I want to see the rooftop view. For instance, I heard the observation deck offers a panoramic view of the city.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement, correct small grammar and word order, and give one concrete reason or example about the view or lifestyle. Keep it concise and natural (2–3 sentences).

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building at least once. The main reason is the amazing views from high floors; for example, I imagine waking up to a wide city skyline and feeling more connected to urban life.

× Yes, I saw some and I see it as a beautiful because we don't have that in our province and I high and high, I'm happy to see that.

✓ Yes, I saw some and I see them as beautiful because we don't have any in our province, and I feel very happy to see them.

Pronoun error: 'it' refers to plural 'some' so use 'them'. Article/adjective errors: 'a beautiful' is incorrect before plural; use 'beautiful' without 'a'. 'that' should be 'any' for plural none in province. 'I high and high' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I feel very happy'. Suggestions: match pronoun number to noun, remove incorrect article, use appropriate quantifier 'any', and use correct verbs for feelings.

× Yes, because that's my hobby and I love to take a pictures of skyscrapers because we don't have that in our province. So I think it is remembrance and.

✓ Yes, because that's my hobby and I love to take pictures of skyscrapers since we don't have any in our province. So I think it is a way to remember them.

Article and noun number errors: 'a pictures' is wrong; use 'pictures' or 'a picture'. 'that' should be 'any' when referring to none in province. Sentence ending 'it is remembrance and' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'it is a way to remember them'. Suggestions: ensure singular/plural agreement with articles and use clearer noun phrases for abstract nouns like 'remembrance'.

× Yes, in the IT park because there is so many build tall buildings out there and I find it. I saw it.

✓ Yes, in the IT park because there are so many tall buildings out there, and I saw them.

Quantifier and subject-verb agreement: 'there is so many' should be 'there are so many' because 'many' takes a plural subject. Word order: 'build tall buildings' is incorrect; use 'tall buildings'. Pronoun: 'I find it. I saw it.' is unclear and uses singular 'it' for plural; use 'I saw them'. Suggestions: use 'there are' with plural nouns, correct adjective order, and match pronouns to plural antecedents.

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building because I want to experience it also once in my life and I know it's the view is very amazing and feels like umm.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because I want to experience it at least once in my life, and I know the view is amazing.

Redundant and incorrect tense/structure: 'experience it also once' is awkward; 'at least once' is natural. 'I know it's the view is very amazing' uses two subjects; correct to 'the view is amazing'. Remove filler 'feels like umm' in formal answer. Suggestions: use idiomatic time expressions ('at least once'), avoid double subjects, and keep sentences concise.