Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ số lượng, ví trí). Chú ý ngữ pháp (chủ ngữ-động từ) và sửa lỗi từ vựng, đồng thời tránh tiếng ồ (uh).

Example: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home because I live in the city's industrial and commercial district. For example, two office towers and a large factory complex are within a ten-minute walk from my apartment.

Suggestion: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với lí do cụ thể; dùng từ vựng chính xác (architecture, modern) và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ. Thêm liên từ để mạch lạc (for example, because, so).

Example: Not really. I rarely photograph buildings because most nearby structures are modern and plain, so they don't catch my eye. Instead, I usually take pictures of people or landscapes because they convey more emotion and variety.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý rõ ràng nhưng cần chính xác tên địa điểm và cấu trúc logic hơn. Tránh lỗi cấu trúc (word order) và rút gọn để không quá dài. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về lí do (một hoặc hai tiện ích) và dùng liên từ hợp lí.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Lima Tower because I am fascinated by its modern architecture and panoramic city views. The interior appears luxurious, and features such as the rooftop observation deck and a fine restaurant would make the visit very enjoyable.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và dùng cấu trúc chính xác (I would enjoy living in a tall building). Tránh ngập ngừng và sửa lỗi từ (talmuding, classic). Nên nêu rõ lí do cụ thể (view, amenities, location) và giữ câu ngắn gọn, tối đa 3-4 câu.

Example: Yes, I would enjoy living in a tall building because they often offer great panoramic views and modern facilities. For instance, living on a high floor could be peaceful and provide easy access to amenities like gyms and rooftop gardens.

× there are many top many tall buildings and factories in my areas

✓ there are many tall buildings and factories in my area

The noun 'area' should be singular when referring to the general location where the speaker lives; 'areas' implies multiple distinct locations. Also 'top many' is redundant and incorrect; keep 'many tall buildings'. Suggestion: use 'my area' to refer to the neighborhood and remove redundant words.

× I don't usually take photos of buildings because I rarely notice any architecture beauty in the tone modern buildings around my area

✓ I don't usually take photos of buildings because I rarely notice any architectural beauty in the modern buildings around my area

Use the adjective form 'architectural' to modify 'beauty'. 'Any architecture beauty' is incorrect. Also 'tone' is incorrect and should be removed; use 'the modern buildings'. Suggestion: use adjective forms to describe nouns and remove extraneous words.

× I prefer photographing people or landscape because they feel more interesting in in expressive

✓ I prefer photographing people or landscapes because I find them more interesting and expressive

Use plural 'landscapes' to match 'people' and the verb 'find' is more natural than 'feel' for expressing opinion. 'In in expressive' is erroneous repetition and wrong word order; correct to 'interesting and expressive'. Suggestion: ensure parallel noun forms and proper adjective order.

× I really want to visit Lima everyone because I am fascinated by its modern architecture and panoramic views of the city

✓ I really want to visit Lima because I am fascinated by its modern architecture and panoramic views of the city

The word 'everyone' is incorrect in this context and should be removed. It created a plural/extra element that does not fit the sentence. Suggestion: remove irrelevant words to keep the sentence focused.

× The interior looks very luxurious and the facilities like the restaurant are observation decks seem excellent

✓ The interior looks very luxurious and the facilities, like the restaurant and observation decks, seem excellent

List items need correct punctuation and conjunctions. 'Like the restaurant are observation decks' is jumbled; place commas and 'and' to list 'restaurant and observation decks'. Suggestion: use commas to separate examples and include conjunctions for clarity.

× so I think I would really enjoy the whole experience

✓ so I think I would really enjoy the whole experience

This sentence is grammatically fine and matches the context, so no change is necessary. Explanation: sentence structure is correct and appropriate for expressing opinion.

× In my opinion, I really enjoy living in a talmuding because I like their modern umm classic and I think they have many panoramic views so I can really relax when I live in Montalvi

✓ In my opinion, I would really enjoy living in a tall building because I like their modern, classic style and I think they offer many panoramic views, so I could really relax when I live there

Multiple errors: 'talmuding' is a misspelling of 'tall building'. 'I really enjoy' should be 'I would really enjoy' to express hypothetical desire. 'Their modern umm classic' is unclear; change to 'their modern, classic style'. 'They have many panoramic views' -> 'they offer many panoramic views'. 'When I live in Montalvi' is unclear; use 'when I live there' unless 'Montalvi' is the building name — keep 'there' to be safe. Suggestion: fix spelling, use conditional 'would' for hypothetical, clarify adjectives and pronouns.